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AN INKY DARKNESS

I poured the dark ink on the page To warn the once and future sage That somewhere in this cryptic maze Within the laughter resided rage For poetry’s a field of mines Of prickly thorns and clinging vines Of predators with gaping maws Of ice cream soda’s without straws For all I do is hold the pen I do not tell it where or when I only know that when it starts I never know where it will end The ink is neither foul nor fair It forms the words but doesn’t care For it is not a part of them Just looping lines that help them share Un-knotted truths and jumbled lies As grease stains of now cold French fries Deny the sun its great reprise My sleepless eyes refute it’s rise

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Date: 6/29/2024 3:34:00 PM
As I've mentioned before John, you hold the prize for your Ars Poetica masterpieces...this poem is no exception. The last two stanzas are quite brilliant....you are indeed a master of the pen my friend.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/29/2024 4:12:00 PM
you keep it up Paul and I may have to put a book together...thanks for your continued support
Date: 6/29/2024 10:02:00 AM
Rage comes through inky darkness, so true, a little of everything and a bit of humor in the ending.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/29/2024 4:09:00 PM
given that my poetical mantra has always been... "It is the nature of the poet to provoke, not to explain" .. kinda like poking a beehive...you get stung now and then but also find some honey...thanks for stopping to read and comment
Date: 6/29/2024 8:56:00 AM
This is so cool! John I love the energy to content and how you make us think!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/29/2024 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Karen, always appreciate your visits.

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