An Impulsive Grin

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Splendiferous songbirds begin tweeting; just as the sun rises, to avoid any surprises. Like a whispering violin or the touch of a gentle breeze; their chirping sets my heart at ease. Triggering an impulsive grin, they take the time to greet the sun; and celebrate a new day won. A cool mist caresses my skin, and makes me feel that I'm alive; and born to do more than survive. And when a hummingbird pops in flying from flower to flower; while taking a dewy shower. I'm in tears, much to my chagrin, watching Dawn ink a scarlet sky; its grandeur draws a gentle sigh. Splendiferous songbirds begin like a whispering violin. Triggering an impulsive grin, a cool mist caresses my skin, And when a hummingbird pops in, I'm in tears, much to my chagrin.

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Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2023 12:01:00 AM

Emile, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. I love your image and this form !

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/21/2023 8:01:00 AM

Thanks, Constance; as always, I welcome the placement and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/20/2023 6:03:00 PM

I like this, Emile, it shines with all the specs of the constanza indicating some effort on your part. Free verse is good, but requires less work IMHO. Congratulations on a fine piece of poetry.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/21/2023 8:00:00 AM

Thanks, Reason; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Ann Peck

Date: 5/16/2023 4:09:00 PM

Beautiful, Emile. I love birds, too. Best of luck!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2023 4:59:00 PM

Thanks, Ann; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.