Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

An Impulsive Grin

Splendiferous songbirds begin
tweeting; just as the sun rises,
avoiding any surprises.

Like the strings of a violin
or the touch of a gentle breeze;
chirping birds set my heart at ease.

Triggering an impulsive grin,
they take the time to greet the sun;
and celebrate a new day won.

A cool mist caresses my skin,
letting me feel that I'm alive;
and born to do more than survive.

And when a hummingbird pops in,
it flies from flower to flower;
while taking a dewy shower.

I'm in tears, much to my chagrin,
watching Dawn ink a scarlet sky;
its grandeur draws a gentle sigh.

Splendiferous songbirds begin
like the strings of a violin
Triggering an impulsive grin,
a cool mist caresses my skin,
And when a hummingbird pops in;
I'm in tears, much to my chagrin.

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Constance La France May 21, 2023 at 12:01 AM Emile, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. I love your image and this form ! Emile Pinet May 21, 2023 at 8:01 AM Thanks, Constance; as always, I welcome the placement and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Reason A. Poteet May 20, 2023 at 6:03 PM I like this, Emile, it shines with all the specs of the constanza indicating some effort on your part. Free verse is good, but requires less work IMHO. Congratulations on a fine piece of poetry. Emile Pinet May 21, 2023 at 8:00 AM Thanks, Reason; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Ann Peck May 16, 2023 at 4:09 PM Beautiful, Emile. I love birds, too. Best of luck! Emile Pinet May 16, 2023 at 4:59 PM Thanks, Ann; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.