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An Icicle - Haiku

Unable to move
Then kissed by the Sun of God
I am free at last

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2009 9:08:00 AM

I love this one. That is what our emotions become sometimes unless we are touched. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 1/29/2009 5:03:00 PM

Glad I ran into this one again. So much packed in just three lines. Love the second line. Blessings to you for sharing these thoughts with us. Glad to hear your novel is going well. Best wishes with it and all your other writing endeavors. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/9/2008 1:14:00 PM

Excellent haiku, brilliantly written love the concept...Raul

Teresita Cailo

Date: 12/5/2008 8:55:00 PM

The combination of haiku and personification is really fitting... wonderful :) Teri

John Heck

Date: 12/5/2008 3:36:00 PM

Your poetry never ceases to amaze and dazzle me! This haiku is both timeless and breathtaking! Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/5/2008 10:51:00 AM

An icicle, loosed by nature and thus by God... beautiful! Love, Keith

Sue Mason

Date: 12/5/2008 9:21:00 AM

Lots of double meanings here, Elaine!! Great job with this remarkable haiku.

James Foulk

Date: 12/4/2008 1:33:00 PM

a beautfful piece of poetry. thank you for reading my blue river and for your comment

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/3/2008 7:42:00 PM

Dear Elaine, Very well done Haiku I assume it is in Seashell Islands' member contest Winter Solstice Good Luck LOVEYOUr POETIC Talent.. .HG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/3/2008 7:18:00 AM

Good job on this one..the second line is inspired..isnt it fun when one really comes together..like this one? BG

Brian Strand

Date: 12/3/2008 1:01:00 AM

Nice play on words Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 12/2/2008 11:28:00 PM

heyyyyyy amazing ! :)

Date: 12/2/2008 4:27:00 PM

What an inspirational poem! Great message. You made the most of just three lines. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you my friend. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/2/2008 12:42:00 PM

A personification haiku! So amazing and beautifully visual. Love, Shar

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/2/2008 10:08:00 AM

This is so beautiful, a wonderful image you have portrayed here. Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem, I appreciate it. :) It's actually about my Dad. Thanks again Blessings, ~Michaela~

P Sheart

Date: 12/2/2008 9:47:00 AM

Elaine A beautiful thought from beautiful you. Enjoyed. Happy safe Holidays to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/2/2008 9:38:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, and I just love the phrase "Sun of God" ~Juliane