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An Icicle - Haiku

Unable to move Then kissed by the Sun of God I am free at last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/1/2009 9:08:00 AM
I love this one. That is what our emotions become sometimes unless we are touched. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2009 5:03:00 PM
Glad I ran into this one again. So much packed in just three lines. Love the second line. Blessings to you for sharing these thoughts with us. Glad to hear your novel is going well. Best wishes with it and all your other writing endeavors. Karen
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Date: 12/9/2008 1:14:00 PM
Excellent haiku, brilliantly written love the concept...Raul
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Date: 12/5/2008 8:55:00 PM
The combination of haiku and personification is really fitting... wonderful :) Teri
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Date: 12/5/2008 3:36:00 PM
Your poetry never ceases to amaze and dazzle me! This haiku is both timeless and breathtaking! Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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Date: 12/5/2008 10:51:00 AM
An icicle, loosed by nature and thus by God... beautiful! Love, Keith
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Date: 12/5/2008 9:21:00 AM
Lots of double meanings here, Elaine!! Great job with this remarkable haiku.
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Date: 12/4/2008 1:33:00 PM
a beautfful piece of poetry. thank you for reading my blue river and for your comment
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Date: 12/3/2008 7:42:00 PM
Dear Elaine, Very well done Haiku I assume it is in Seashell Islands' member contest Winter Solstice Good Luck LOVEYOUr POETIC Talent.. .HG
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Date: 12/3/2008 7:18:00 AM
Good job on this one..the second line is inspired..isnt it fun when one really comes together..like this one? BG
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Date: 12/3/2008 1:01:00 AM
Nice play on words Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/2/2008 11:28:00 PM
heyyyyyy amazing ! :)
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Date: 12/2/2008 4:27:00 PM
What an inspirational poem! Great message. You made the most of just three lines. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you my friend. Karen
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Date: 12/2/2008 12:42:00 PM
A personification haiku! So amazing and beautifully visual. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/2/2008 10:08:00 AM
This is so beautiful, a wonderful image you have portrayed here. Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem, I appreciate it. :) It's actually about my Dad. Thanks again Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:47:00 AM
Elaine A beautiful thought from beautiful you. Enjoyed. Happy safe Holidays to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:38:00 AM
Wonderful haiku, and I just love the phrase "Sun of God" ~Juliane
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:33:00 AM
So cute, and clever. I can see this happy icicle finally letting go!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:13:00 AM
Clever piece , Elaine , in perfect format .... Rgds , Drip.. Drip.. Drip..Drip.......
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