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An Evening in The Tones of Rothko

The last embers of a sunset sink below a dark horizon almost mirroring a Rothko painting in its somber and weighted tones. A sadness has found a place to settle for the evening and is absorbed by the water and sky. It seems weary, unable to take form in a thought and be given a name, but is more a shade as that which inhabits the internal landscape of a haiku when something fragile and exquisitely beautiful is caught briefly in its passing and let go. It is a sadness that feels soul deep, reverberates in the ear beyond any audible note from a place that echoes an emptiness, the absence of what perhaps first gave it breath and let its fragile existence float free and alone to wash up on the shores of this gentle evening and utter a sigh.

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Date: 9/19/2024 8:10:00 AM
Hello Paul, I just loved your visual language of Rothko's art to explore complex, intangible emotions, mirroring how his paintings often evoke deep feelings that are difficult to put into words. Excellent Write! - Blessings My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/23/2024 2:31:00 AM
Many thanks Daniel for your comments. Rothko's work has always intrigued me...its power to evoke a strong emotional response. Tried to capture a little of that. Value yr thoughtful words my friend. Cheers, Paul
Date: 9/18/2024 4:09:00 AM
I saw your name appear and took myself and a cup of tea into the garden to enjoy your poem. I sunk immediately into three layers, for me the beauty of the earth, the weight of existence and the current moment. Then a cabbage butterfly stopped nearby and I felt sorry I'd never deemed it beautiful before now. There seems to be some mass equation and the balance of all things seen for a fleeting moment before we tip then overcompensate for a while. Thank you for bringing these moments of beauty
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/23/2024 2:21:00 AM
Some meaningful and thoughtful words DD?..a delight to read...thankyou for giving the poem some of your mindspace. Always a welcoming place. Your sensitivity shines through. Take care...

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