An Evening in The Tones of Rothko

The last embers of a sunset
sink below a dark horizon
almost mirroring a Rothko
painting in its somber
and weighted tones.
A sadness has found
a place to settle 
for the evening

and is absorbed 
by the water and sky.
It seems weary, unable
to take form in a thought
and be given a name, 
but is more a shade 
as that which inhabits
the internal landscape

of a haiku when something
fragile and exquisitely beautiful 
is caught briefly in its passing
and let go.
It is a sadness that feels
soul deep, reverberates
in the ear beyond
any audible note

from a place that echoes 
an emptiness, 
the absence of what perhaps 
first gave it breath 
and let its fragile existence
float free and alone
to wash up on the shores
of this gentle evening
and utter a sigh.
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Rodgers Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 8:10 AM
Hello Paul, I just loved your visual language of Rothko's art to explore complex, intangible emotions, mirroring how his paintings often evoke deep feelings that are difficult to put into words. Excellent Write! - Blessings My Dear Friend, Daniel
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September 23, 2024 at 2:31 AM
Many thanks Daniel for your comments. Rothko's work has always intrigued me...its power to evoke a strong emotional response. Tried to capture a little of that. Value yr thoughtful words my friend. Cheers, Paul
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