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An Erin Adventure

It was an autumn day, fresh and crisp, with a slight breeze blowing that made our cheeks rosy. My Aunt Trix and I were on the trip of a lifetime, one in which she had been making plans for almost all of her seventy-five years. Being of Irish heritage we both felt akin to that beautiful country. Our first stop after seeing London was to take a train ride through charming Wales with its wet emerald hills glistening after a light rain. Soon we were at Holyhead at the Ferry buying our tickets to cross the Irish sea to Dun Laoghairie. The ferry was a pleasant surprise. It was decorated with intimate tables along side grand glass windows for a wonderful view. The center, where different restaurants lured in hungry patrons, was akin to the neon lights of the Las Vegas strip. There was even an inviting kid friendly area where children were elated in seeking out adventure. After arriving in Dun Laoghairie, we were told is pronounced Dun Laorry, I rented an automatic compact car and we headed for Galway. I had to keep reminding myself to keep on the left side of the road. We found a lovely bed and breakfast. Galway was a lovely rural village near the sea with friendly folks. We each had our own room. We delighted in hearing the lambs as we went to sleep. After a wonderful full Irish breakfast the next morning, we were on our way to visit the famous Blarney Castle. ancient castle walls... the Blarney stone awaits our precarious kiss We arrived in the afternoon and were thrilled at the first sight of the castle with bright rust hued ivy vining its way around the round tower that overlooks the River Martin. The current keep, a medieval stronghold in Blarney near Cork, was built by the MacCarthy of Muskerry dynasty, a cadet branch of the Kings of Desmond, and dates from 1446. The Blarney stone, reputed to gift eloquence of speech, laid at the end on the top of the roofless keep with a line of eager tourists waiting to lie on their backs, head first, to kiss the well worn stone. I will never forget the ecstatic smile on my aunts face as she was helped up after kissing the Blarney Stone. I captured her joy with my camera. charming autumn view... the castle's steep steps were climbed to kiss the cold stone Visiting Blarney Castle and it's grounds was the highlight of our holiday. The memories and photographs still cause a smile and a tear. 8-7-17

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Date: 8/29/2017 6:18:00 AM
Connie, you must head north next time. I will have the kettle on the boil.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/29/2017 5:30:00 PM
I sure will. I have been as far north as Donegal. Beautiful country. I visited Yeats gravesite at the church near Sligo. By the way, tea is my favorite drink! Thank you Jean. Hugs, Connie : )
Date: 8/26/2017 2:42:00 PM
just love this - have never been to Ireland but my late dad loved it there
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/28/2017 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Jack. I appreciate that. It didn't make the short winner's list but sure has gotten some lovely comments! : )
Date: 8/25/2017 8:08:00 AM
My friend, I am of Irish descent and this truly exceptional presentation was quite wonderful to read and admire.. My father's ancestry is of English and Irish nobility. Such enchanting imagery and interesting reading on this fine morn.. Definitely a fav and thanks for this shining gem..
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Date: 8/25/2017 2:22:00 PM
Me too Robert. I have Irish and English heritage. I am delighted that you enjoyed my haibun. Thank you so much for the fave my friend! Blessings, Connie : )
Date: 8/24/2017 5:54:00 PM
Connie, I too enjoyed the sense of happiness and satisfaction YOU felt for the trip of YOUR life!! I hope we both do well in the contest. I loved that line "precarious kiss" what a great description for how it would seem!! I remember you telling me of Ireland. We are both Irish lasses!!
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Date: 8/25/2017 2:27:00 PM
Yes, thank you Andrea. I miss my aunt so much. She passed away July 2011. I am so thankful we were able to take that holiday together. I hope that we both get on the list. Your haibun was very well written and I'm pretty sure at least you will be on the list. Hugs, Connie
Date: 8/24/2017 5:01:00 PM
What wonderful memories to last a life time. Lovely. Thanks so much for sharing. God Bless, JB Been off line awhile due to health problems. Good to be back. :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:43:00 AM
Been there but didn't dare make the climb, too steep for this old man. My loss...
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Date: 8/24/2017 9:06:00 AM
A lovely description of the journey with your Aunt...I'm glad you were able to do so my friend...life, as we know, is toooo short...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/24/2017 3:52:00 AM
Oh gosh what a charming story teller you are, I wanted the story to go on longer. I'm glad you got to kiss that Blarney Stone, that's on the bucket list next...Maria xxx
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Date: 8/23/2017 5:48:00 PM
An endearing piece Connie. For those of us who have not travelled to Ireland, you have given us the next best thing; a wonderfully vivid, beautifully detailed tour through your lovely eyes. This is just gorgeous. The emotions you experienced you have conveyed marvelously to us. What memories you have, thank you for sharing. A real treat:)
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:07:00 PM
wonderful journey, wonderful poetry.
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Date: 8/23/2017 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful description of the trip Connie, culminating in the thrill of kissing the Blarney Stone...
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I made a calendar of photos of our trip and gave it to her for Christmas. She passed on in July of 2011. : )
Date: 8/22/2017 11:04:00 PM
What a superb Haibun, Connie, and a charmingly beautiful story - I enjoyed this immensely and wanted to read it again! Excellent work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/23/2017 1:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Greg. My precious aunt passed away in July of 2011 at 89 and I am so happy we shared that holiday together. I am glad you enjoyed it. : )
Date: 8/22/2017 8:42:00 PM
Hi Connie, a wonderful memory and an excellent poem. You had us with you through the journey of your memory. Erin's green isle. I have never been to Ireland but for some reason it is in my heart. Maybe i do have some Celtic blood in me. I loved your imagery in this Haibun. Another piece of gold from your pen. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/23/2017 1:49:00 AM
You are so sweet Mike. I think it is the warmth of the people that make Ireland such a delight. I have some great stories from my three visits there. I so appreciate the fave my friend! : )
Date: 8/22/2017 6:40:00 PM
You made me feel as if I was there!
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Date: 8/23/2017 1:53:00 AM
Thank you Sunlite. It was wonderful to explore, get lost and discover a toy soldier factory where all are made. We had so much fun. ; )
Date: 8/22/2017 6:07:00 PM
such wonderful imagery and vivid memories of your journey to Ireland. I too have kissed the Blarney stone and a few years later i found my voice in my poetry:-) hugs jan x
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/23/2017 1:54:00 AM
You see...it worked! Haha. Thank you Jan. : ) xxoo
Date: 8/22/2017 6:07:00 PM
It's wonderful to see the sights through your travel.. I remember Galway from our trip to Ireland. Thanks for sharing!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/23/2017 1:57:00 AM
I love the west the best Vijay. We visited the areas where the movie The Quiet Man was filmed. A favorite movie of ours. Thank you. : )

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