An Endless Dream Dance: Collab With Jo

"You dance love, and you dance joy and you dance dreams." - Gene Kelly I am lost in an endless dream My love and I are together Dancing hand in hand, we're a team Like the zephyr and a feather Swirling and swaying to the beat We are caught up in love's sweet trance To the music, tapping our feet Adrift in our fantasy dance I am drunk with his sweet perfume As I lay my head on his chest We glide and float across the room My trembling heart against his, pressed. All around us are empty seats And memories of happy years And all the while his firm heartbeats, They sound like music to my ears. I look to see my lover’s face And his eyes seem to glow with fire I hold him in a tight embrace Like that a Muse gives to her lyre. So on we dance and time stands still We ignore each passing hour We are imprisoned by the thrill Being in each other’s power. I do not want this dream to end To wake up and find I’m alone But dawn breaks in to apprehend Into the real world, I’m thrown I await night’s darkness to sleep To dream of my love and our dance I am lost in fantasy deep Hope this will last longer perchance
March 31, 2023 Among 1st Place Collab with Jo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel

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Date: 5/19/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thank you very much for all the kind and wonderful words!
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Date: 5/3/2023 6:35:00 AM
To dance brings such joy, as does reading this collaboration Ryan. Great writing! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/2/2023 1:22:00 AM
The first entry to my contest and I was blown away by how you made it yours:) loved it thoroughly, Ryan:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:)
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Date: 4/2/2023 5:48:00 AM
A lovely dream ! Great collaboration ! The stanzas are ingeniously incorporated into a complete whole that the dream looks a flowing one of feelings of love and romance. All the Best Ryan.
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Date: 4/2/2023 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, dear Friend, for such wonderful comment. I am much encouraged by your kindness. My regards to you as well.
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