An Endless Dream Dance - Collab With Jo

I am lost in an endless dream
My love and I are together
Dancing hand in hand, we're a team
Like the zephyr and a feather
Swirling and swaying to the beat
We are caught up in love's sweet trance
To the music, tapping our feet
Adrift in our fantasy dance

I do not want this dream to end
To wake up and find I’m alone
But dawn breaks in to apprehend
Into the real world, I’m thrown
I await night’s darkness to sleep
To dream of my love and our dance
I am lost in fantasy deep
Hope this will last longer perchance

Our love is like a fairy tale,
Unfolding in a dreamy haze,
We dance together, and we sail
Through starry nights and sunny days.
Our hearts beat like the rhythm's sound,
A never-ending, perfect tune,
And when I wake, I am spellbound,
Hoping for the night to come soon.

This dance is more than just a dream,
It's a love that will never fade,
For as long as our hearts still gleam,
Our endless dance will be remade.
We'll twirl and spin forevermore,
With joy and love, we'll never tire,
Our dance eternal to explore,
Together, in this dream we'll aspire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 5/2/2023 1:32:00 AM
This one is superb writing, Nakang, would have placed first, if only you had not placed it under "free verse"...this is "lay" form, anyway, congratulations, enjoyed our collab:)
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Nakang Mashilo
Date: 5/8/2023 12:12:00 AM
Thank you...there is no end to learning
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