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An Empty Throne Part 6 of 9

An empty trance – part 6 He stood before the arching glass as if by angel’s breath was blown Her beauty lives though she may pass of any goddess he had known From there within a pocket slight retrieved a vial of liquid blue and raised it up into the light so glistened in enchanted view Upon his staff the gem it shone, an emerald green did flood the room Now closed his eyes in shimmered tone with words now spoken, dark of gloom “Return this beauty to her form of daisy rush and willow feel To cleanse the soul of poisoned storm and sorrows cast as to reveal” Into the chamber came the king, he stumbled slowly to her side “Dear Shaman let your magic sing, without her love my heart has died” The sorcerer he cast no glance, unfazed in stoic manner seen “She lives still in an empty trance not hell nor heaven, in between” “Our time is till the setting sun For on that hour all is lost As spirits call the precious one A beckoning of lifeless cost” He raised the vial, tilting so, upon his fingers several drips Again the gem topped staff did glow, then place the liquid on her lips “This can not be,” his salted ply “She does not stir, she does not breathe, As darkness wanders towards the sky In amber moments to perceive He placed a hand upon her head to summon fact with tethered scan “Where be the flask, her poisoned bled?” A sentry set it in his hand

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Date: 8/11/2019 8:52:00 PM
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Date: 12/22/2016 12:18:00 PM
I'm in complete agreement w/Darren. 7 Great writing, Chris. On to the next phase. Love and peace to you
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:09:00 PM
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Date: 12/14/2016 6:44:00 PM
I'm sooooo glad I get to read the whole story in one sit... I would have died of curiosity otherwise! ;)
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Date: 12/13/2016 9:26:00 PM
Curious question, do you have the entire story already outlined and sketched, or does it grow as you write? It's something my prose writer friends are divided on. Some have the characters only described to the tee. Others the story too...
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Date: 12/14/2016 8:26:00 AM
Well, what I try to do is create the opening and place a little clue in there that will tie the ending in (hint hint) and then roughly pen out the ending to match up and bring it all to a close, but the middle just comes as I write. In the case of this one, I knew I would have a queen and a king, but the rest of the characters just appear as I go.
Date: 12/13/2016 4:20:00 PM
Yes, Chris, you are very creative all the way around. I am stuck on thinking about the Queen too and wonder what is going to happen. :)
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Date: 12/13/2016 4:35:00 PM
Hi there Heidi, tomorrow you will find out what happens. I can not even begin to tell you how much it means to me that you are staying with me on this one Heidi. You are an amazing friend.
Date: 12/13/2016 3:52:00 PM
WoW! Chris I'm really enjoying this series. I'm rooting for the Queen all the way. The magic has to work. She's in some type purgatory. Yep this feels like a movie. And the suspense is gettting to me. Do we have to wait until tomorrow to find out if the Queen is going to come back to life? A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/13/2016 4:34:00 PM
Sorry my friend, yes, tomorrow will bring the conclusion. :) Thanks Alexis, I truly mean it. You are always so supportive and kind to me. You are a wonderful friend.

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