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An Ebony Tether

A sanguine sun singes the edge of Earth, as stillness swiftly spreads over the ground. And receding rays give shadows their girth, swallowing the last lingering light found. Twilight fades, as darkness begins to creep, loosely leashed to an ebony tether. And from the undergrowth, there's not a peep, as dusk gathers stray shadows together. The day shuts down, and stars begin to show, glittering against a backdrop of black. And as tides in cobalt seas ebb and flow, darkness welcomes a shimmering moon back. Shadows shackle silhouettes to the night, awaiting breaking dawn's first rays of light. (Sonnet) 3/17/2017

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Date: 5/15/2018 8:08:00 PM
Your alliteration adds to the charm of this lovely sonnet, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Line, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/20/2017 2:46:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem I like when the sky is dark and the stars comes out at night. The stars sparkles brightly along with the quarter moon. My favourite time of evening.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/24/2017 2:55:00 PM
Your welcome.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/24/2017 2:54:00 PM
Your wel come.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/21/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, your support is truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2017 5:28:00 PM
You've set your prose in motion from scarlet sun to shadows to stars! Lovely!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Kim, your support is truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2017 6:10:00 AM
Nice use of consonance in this sonnet..Nicely penned
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, your support is truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 6:00:00 PM
Another spectacular write, comparable to your view from afar, for me are your two best. I've got to fave this beauty! a7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/20/2017 6:04:00 PM
Thanks very much John, I always enjoy your friendly visits, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2017 7:54:00 AM
a poet who can conjure up such vivid pictures in ones mind is a true talent. Beautiful
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Date: 3/19/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Maria, your support is truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2017 1:50:00 AM
Wow, Emile! This is a beautiful sonnet. I love the descriptive and unique imagery from the title to last couplet. Well done and a fav! Hugs, Rhonda
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda, for taking the time and care to give me this truly wonderful review, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2017 6:00:00 PM
wow this is a great poem Emile, i love it!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Collins, your support is appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2017 12:28:00 PM
An "ebony tether" and "shadows shackle silhouettes"! Wow, your amazing sonnet astounds, dear Emile! You are a "poet of poets" in my book! A 7+ and a fave :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Laura, I needed a positive stroke today and I have found it within your most thoughtful words, again I thank you. Emile.

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