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An Early Wake Up Call

The early sun rose from behind the hills. It was a wake-up call for me. Full of pep, I flew atop the post One of many that surrounded the hen pen. I gave my best rendition of a poultry reveille. My lovely harem came to my call. Some ruthless spoilt sport hated me. Was it unreasonable to be wakened up At such an early morning? A boot came flying out of the window Hitting me on my head. Down I fell onto the hard ground, Lay still, dizzy with the blow. My hens ran around clucking, afraid. Mine was an unyielding demanding For though old, I did love them all Now I just lay there deflated Alas, I was past my prime. For now, I lost the symbol of my pride!

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Date: 10/20/2022 10:15:00 AM
Creative. Good job! Huggs, Pangie
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Date: 10/15/2022 5:47:00 AM
I'd like to meet that old rooster myself. LOL..I enjoyed the humor. I needed the chuckle. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2022 12:14:00 PM
- It sounds like you were on a hen's visit at my neighbor's house ... they start the show long before the sun rises :) - hugs
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Date: 10/14/2022 11:14:00 AM
Well done, Victor, now that he gave you the boot you can give him the bird! Robert
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Date: 10/13/2022 1:12:00 PM
LOL Victor You and Toby Keith. "I ain't as good as I once was, but I'm as good once as I ever was!"
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Date: 10/13/2022 10:24:00 AM
what the heck was the boot flying out the window? Who threw it at you? I enjoyed this free verse of yours, Victor
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Date: 10/13/2022 8:21:00 AM
Poor rooster, getting the boot! Hope he still found much to crow about. I enjoyed this poem a lot, Victor. :)
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Date: 10/13/2022 7:30:00 AM
Poor rooster getting the boot thrown at him....A sorry state of affairs.Delice
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Date: 10/13/2022 1:28:00 AM
What an imagination you have, Victor!
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Date: 10/12/2022 4:14:00 PM
Nicely written Victor thank you for posting...
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Date: 10/12/2022 4:09:00 PM
Victor if your tale is true it was a horrid thing to throw a boot at you. I would love to get a roosters early morning call, but in a busy place there’s no cock-a-doodle-do at all… Belle
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Date: 10/12/2022 12:55:00 PM
Are you the rooster, the man or the boot? All three? I love this! Well done, Victor!
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Date: 10/12/2022 12:26:00 PM
Sound of a rooster awakens the morning announcing an new day. Some don't appreciate this--not very nice to take it out on a bird! Nicely conveyed with feelings!
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Date: 10/12/2022 10:51:00 AM
Morning told from the roosters point of view, Victor. So imaginative yet tinged with sadness. Though not a morning person, I still appreciate the morning reveille of the faithful rooster and hope your rooster recovered his claim to fame. Wonderful images. Blessings!
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Date: 10/12/2022 10:46:00 AM
This poem is very interesting to read, Victor. Absolutely loved it, and thought the imagery and personification you used, together with the amazing lexicon you selected, added a depth of elegance that was quite mesmerizing to your poem. Dear friend, best wishes.
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Date: 10/12/2022 10:02:00 AM
Incredible imagery throughout... Loved the ending... Such great fun verses to read... Enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 10/12/2022 9:04:00 AM
Great imagery of personification. Many blessings and hugs my friend
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Date: 10/12/2022 8:52:00 AM
Someone is not a morning person, when I was at work I was always up at 03.00 so cock a doodle doo didn't bother me. Tom
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