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An Autumn Stroll

Colors Red, orange, gold Paint the fall foliage Nature's amazing masterpiece Displayed Dancing Leaves pirouette In the crisp autumn breeze Creating a crunchy carpet Below Inhale The cooler air With a hint of wood smoke Somewhere a fireplace has been lit Cozy
10/25/15 For Eve Roper's Autumn Stroll Cinquain contest.

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Date: 3/11/2017 3:16:00 PM
Reminds me of old days on the farm. I loved those days. Beautiful write.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/12/2017 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Ricky!
Date: 11/16/2015 8:48:00 PM
An excellent cinquain.
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Date: 11/1/2015 5:05:00 PM
a lovely evocation of autumn, congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 11/1/2015 3:51:00 PM
Great feeling and imagery in your Cinquains, Kim. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/29/2015 9:47:00 PM
This lovely poem made me smile and say "Ahhhh"! Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! I'm so glad it made you smile!
Date: 10/29/2015 9:10:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Date: 10/29/2015 1:53:00 PM
Lovely...! Well done for your win.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Julia!
Date: 10/29/2015 12:30:00 PM
You made reference to dancing too! Lovely! Congratulations, Kim! hugs
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! It just makes sense to imagine leaves dancing as they fall to the ground.
Date: 10/29/2015 8:37:00 AM
Excellent Cinquain poem.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, Nayda!
Date: 10/27/2015 9:54:00 AM
Nice write Kim. I do love the smell of a fireplace burning.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, James. I do too!
Date: 10/26/2015 8:47:00 AM
Pretty colorful and heady autumn Kim!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Olive!
Date: 10/26/2015 2:43:00 AM
Really enjoyed this Cinquain Kim, Of an Autumn stroll Best wishes for the contest Kevin
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thank you, Kevin! Glad you liked it.

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