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An August Ago

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The stars shone so much brighter, And it was merely one August ago, When carefree hearts were lighter, Before deep gold summer had to go! The wandering birds sang a finale, In the color splashed sunset hour, As bare trees shivered in a valley, And long gone is my scarlet flower!

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Judy Ball

Date: 9/7/2021 2:01:00 PM

This is lovely Evelyn. My back yard is a garden where I love to sit in the summer and I have many roses which is my favorite flower. Loved this. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/7/2021 4:11:00 PM

It's wonderful to have a favorite spot in nature that you can return to again and again. Roses are a favorite of mine, too. We have just gotten some much needed rain. Thank you for the lovely comment. God bless you, too, Evelyn :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/7/2021 1:29:00 PM

Love the title and its use in your poem! Deep gold summer, the finale, shivering of trees and disappearance of a scarlet flower!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/7/2021 4:14:00 PM

All to return upon another August. Thanks so much, Kim. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/6/2021 12:55:00 PM

WoW! Evelyn, You have composed a well written piece. I agree with Mystic it does remind me of the poets of old. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2021 3:16:00 PM

Thank you for the compliments, dear Alexis. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Evelyn :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/6/2021 3:57:00 AM

Oh Evelyn , this poem of yours claims my heart totally, you wrote like a poet of old, thankyou for sharing, stay beautiful :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2021 10:28:00 AM

You are so welcome. I am delighted to share. Your words of appreciation are wonderful to hear. Have a blessed week. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/6/2021 1:11:00 AM

Though I hate August because it is too hot in Malta, I am sure it will come again. And we'll enjoy the beautiful flowers.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2021 10:37:00 AM

I planted a lilac bush, so I am looking forward to spring also. Have a wonderful week. :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/5/2021 10:32:00 PM

Long gone my scarlet flower, to be replace by stunning poetry, soon for the circle to return.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2021 10:38:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/5/2021 6:25:00 PM

This is a marvelous poem, Evelyn, rich in imagery and even metaphor, I think. Good rhymes.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/5/2021 7:27:00 PM

I'm so glad you liked it, Milton. Thanks for letting me know. :D