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An Angry Sky

Roaring in like a speeding train, it left no time for me to flee. And my house disintegrated into pieces all around me. Catapulted from my spinning bed, I got tossed around like debris. And in that whirlwind of darkness, it was impossible to see. The air got sucked out of my lungs, and I passed out, thinking I'd die. But I found myself on my back, staring up at an angry sky. 'Twas a miracle I survived that storm; it gave me quite a fright. And suddenly, I realized a tornado touched down last night. I got trapped under some rubble, my legs pinned by a fallen tree. But I could hear people digging, And I thanked God; someone found me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2018 2:36:00 PM
Most interesting read, Emile - hate when that happens!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/2/2015 2:50:00 AM
A sad impact to many lives when hit by a disaster. Not only tangible things that need to repair but also life's sorrow and heartaches, someone has to unravel and start picking up the pieces again. Excellent write, Emile. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 9/2/2015 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Noel, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/1/2015 5:19:00 PM
You put me in the path with you Emil. Prayers your way for you and your community.
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Date: 9/2/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/1/2015 4:24:00 PM
I, too, hope this wasn't a personal experience. Good writing ... CayCay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, this is a work of fiction, I appreciate your concern and friendly comments. Emile.
Date: 9/1/2015 4:23:00 PM
Emile...You aptly describe the sudden devastating that occurs when a tornado hits. Not all are lucky enough to come out of it alive! Nature often comes to remind us how feeble we humans really are! // paul
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Date: 9/2/2015 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/1/2015 4:00:00 PM
gosh, I hope this was not true for YOU. WEll told about a tornado and how quickly it can catch you unaware!
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Date: 9/2/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, this is a work of fiction, I appreciate your concern and support. Emile.

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