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An Angels Tear

An angel shed a tear from both her soul and her heart As she viewed the Earth’s beauty that its people called art Their art came from their souls and from their hands It came with their giving, shown to every man It came from the precious moments that were needed elsewhere And sponsored from the funds that were so hard won and rare It came from ideas when an occasional quiet moment was won And in their world, there are precious few of such ones It came from the hearts that had often known despair As one paid it forward from a gift of another’s fare And Hope slowly rose with each and every smile As a moments’ help began to grow by the mile And all the thoughts became bright where applied So remember how important, can be something you do When someone is given, a momentary helping hand, from you No matter how small, no matter how much It’s the love and the heart that comes with the touch And an Angel did smile That so many had learned to give in a short while And they’d learned: there’s an art to giving so very worthwhile Written 10-25-2015

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Date: 9/15/2016 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful win and wonderfully written piece. I so loved this awesome work of art. Honored to read this. Look forward to reading more of your work. A lovely poem. Sharon
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Date: 9/13/2016 11:30:00 PM
CAROL, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my blog "An Angels Tear" if you'd like. Smiles and Hugs..... LINDA
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Date: 1/24/2016 6:25:00 PM
Good work Carol!
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:56:00 PM
there is an art to how to Live....and it requires that we give....much of ourselves for another's sake....defining our Destiny with a Heavenly Fate....;)
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Date: 11/19/2015 2:45:00 PM
I so agree with you sweet lady. A meaningful poem with a touch of hearts.
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Date: 11/10/2015 9:41:00 PM
I heartily agree with the comments. A great piece. Proud of you. Love Hubby.
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:40:00 AM
I see from comments this piece is a winner, not at all surprising. Congratulations.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/7/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thanks. And I wrote it on my birthday. This has been like a birthday present.
Date: 11/5/2015 8:39:00 AM
I do enjoy your lighter funny writes but pieces like this also resonate.
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win on this fine poem!!
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/7/2015 12:24:00 PM
The response took me by surprise. Thank you.
Date: 11/2/2015 2:00:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win carol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/7/2015 12:23:00 PM
Thanks. The response is more than I expected.
Date: 11/2/2015 11:45:00 AM
Carol, awesome win. SKAT
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/7/2015 12:21:00 PM
Thanks... The response to this poem is amazing.
Date: 11/2/2015 10:12:00 AM
rhyme simply becomes you, carol... sweet congrats on your win!..huggs
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/7/2015 12:20:00 PM
Thank you. Your friend.
Date: 11/2/2015 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations in your win.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/7/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thank you for the contest and the win... You were most kind!
Date: 10/31/2015 8:54:00 AM
This is a special gift you have given us. A departure from Dragon (who of course I love) but I appreciate this alternate form of expression, I found it very touching.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 10/31/2015 9:27:00 AM
Thank you... Every time I have surgery or someone dies I tend to write like this... I tend to like brighter, funny writes as a whole...
Date: 10/30/2015 1:40:00 PM
This is so beautiful Carol and I wholeheartedly agree. A favorite from me.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 10/31/2015 9:28:00 AM
Wow! From the romantic king... I take that as quite an honor.
Date: 10/29/2015 4:10:00 PM
Hello Carol, This is a most excellent free verse write!! One can instantly sense and feel the passion, love, and radiance associated with the Angel and her Tear. The metaphor of her perpetual influence carried on throughout the succeeding verses is enchanting. A "7" + "FAV"!! I enjoyed this one immensely. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Carol Eastman
Date: 10/30/2015 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for such lovely comments.
Date: 10/29/2015 1:16:00 PM
- Carol, this is really beautiful - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Eastman
Date: 10/30/2015 11:05:00 AM
Thank you and good to hear from you again.
Date: 10/29/2015 12:06:00 PM
So beautiful <3
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Carol Eastman
Date: 10/30/2015 11:04:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for the kind comments.

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