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An Angel My Angle

AN ANGEL MY ANGLE How mysteriously and perfectly awesome it would be, If I found what I wanted, but had to climb the highest tree Like Jack and the Bean stalk, right into the heavenly clouds And far beyond, provided the beanstalk, was strong, wanted no doubts! I would send God an email, He is my best friend, tell Him who I am, Also explain that I came from Planet Earth, and my name is Sam, And that I apologise but it would take too long if I waited for an invitation, Go start your travels, said The Mad Hatter, you have done many a preparation! Alice fell fast asleep, weird she admitted later, for I followed the Mad Hatter! Started my climb towards God's Land, found Saint Peter at the gate, who said, Glory, What are you doing here dear girl, your name has not yet been chosen, I want to find an angel Saint Peter, I said, this has always been my passion! He directed me along Paradise Street, where children and dogs played I was enchanted, they looked so happy and people kneeling, they prayed For souls arriving today, but not as I had, up a beanstalk, but as in star wars, Space ships, which landed frequently at Gabriel airport, Heavens corps! I was determined I wanted to find an angel who would be mine, a guardian angel I said to Saint Peter, could I take her home with me, now that was my angle, Or would that not be allowed, I also want her to be my real life poetry muse And help me with my poems and add, true celestial affirmation, could I chose? I’m afraid not, said Saint Peter, what I can do is let you have a peek at who is in plot seven, It’s your Guardian Angel ,I couldn’t believe my eyes, I was alive, how was I in Heaven, Saw my Dad I was shocked, he couldn’t see me, I could not hold back my tears He looked so happy, made my heart glad as he sang, it was music to my ears! It was time to go back, wait said Saint Peter, our Archangel Michael, will fly you back down, And that is the last I remember, I awoke and my mom was there, she wore a frown, I was worried about you, you've been asleep for at least four to five hours, and you were talking, This dream was significant in my life and would be so forever, the sky lit up with lightening! So between the stars and the Milky Way, Alice, the Mad Hatter and Jacks Beanstalk, I had a dream, Many a character and God involved, in fact a story, which to complete, took quite a team!

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Date: 11/9/2020 12:34:00 PM
This was an amazing allegory to read, dear Jenny. I am amazed at how fluidly you imagination works, combining aspects of dreams, memories, fairy tales, scriptures, literature, people; and weaving them into such a wonderful tapestry. It speaks to the deep longing we share of being in God's kingdom and reuniting with our loved ones. Thank you for sharing this fabulous journey! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 9/17/2020 2:13:00 PM
A truly creative use of metaphors and fairytales combined. Mother Angel Father Angel Lightning Worry not or frown my Daughter , Child , Queen
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Date: 9/23/2020 2:46:00 AM
Ta. Christopher, great comment, enjoy your support and comments, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/10/2020 6:46:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … fantasy and magical. An intriguing story presented well once again - thankyou Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/11/2020 11:38:00 AM
Yes, if we allow or minds to wander down the Alice in Wonderland rabbit hole, all things are possible. Thank you for a wonderful comment Lindsay. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/10/2020 3:25:00 AM
- Wonder and magic ... discover a fantasy world full of surprises ... A writing with freedom, imagination and unfoldment ... if we allow it, the imagination is limitless ... you are so good at it - Imagine if we could send an e-mail to our loved ones in heaven, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank-you Sunshine Smile, my wonderful friend and soul sister, your are a verey special poetess with a heart of gold Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 9/9/2020 2:17:00 PM
Your imagination has travelled far and wide, Jenny! So you searched for an angel, little realizing that you already had the perfect one looking after you 24/7. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/9/2020 1:04:00 PM
Dreams can often be mixed up with the many things that go through our mind. The thing is that you remembered your dream and that is something I haven't done in years. It was a wonderful dream. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/9/2020 11:26:00 AM
A wonder of creativity here...Enjoyed the read...
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Date: 9/9/2020 10:12:00 AM
A very entertaining piece. Thanks for your kind visit. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/9/2020 9:29:00 AM
Very creative write Jennifer, I enjoyed your journey. Tom
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Date: 9/8/2020 9:17:00 PM
Jennifer, Real magic in these beans, and all the heavenly hosts. -Richard
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Date: 9/8/2020 12:35:00 PM
Another one of your wonderful creations, Jennifer--with intrigue and fantasy--a dream full of faith! Lovely write!!
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Date: 9/8/2020 11:15:00 AM
What a delightful story of faith and hope. Found the "switch" where we learn she is alive to be quite powerful. You certainly spin an interesting yarn, Jennifer. Too bad Angel Michael couldn't be your guardian angel. He has always been my favorite. Awesome work! Hugs, Carolyn
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/11/2020 10:39:00 AM
Carolyn thank you for a wonderful comment - my Dad has always visited me in dreams when something important is to happen. Therefore I think God has given him the responsibility of being my Guardian from Heaven. Thank you dear friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/8/2020 9:32:00 AM
You are a wonderful story teller this isfun:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/11/2020 10:35:00 AM
Hi Jan, thank you so much, you also do though. Thank you for visiting and a lovely comment. Hope all your family is well. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/8/2020 9:05:00 AM
I enjoyed this ahead-of-time romp through heaven.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/11/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Caren - I like having fun when I write poems, well mostly, I do have my serious ones as well. Take care, Blessings, Jennifer.

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