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An Angel In Disguise

Over the hills near a gentle stream Lies a place evergreen where the butterflies play With an atmosphere so beautiful and tranquil It makes reality feel like a dream. He spots her gently washing her linen with skill Sitting at her favourite spot day after day.   Her soft hands were so wrinkled And her knuckles were left swollen Yet her beauty and wisdom still over flowed The soft linen was crinkled As there were two small loads kept in brass laundry barrels with a touch of gold. Her love so pure with a radiant glow Shown in her face that hides her pain And she hides her scars and silent tears So that no one will ever know. An Angel in Disguise sits in fear Hoping one day to fly free again. Contest. - An Angel In Disguise Sponsor - Isaiah Zerbst

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Date: 1/21/2016 8:38:00 PM
ENJOYED AGAIN:)
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Date: 4/11/2015 9:37:00 AM
What a beautiful descriptive and contemplative write, Sasha. The sensitive touch is apparent from the first lines to the the last.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 4/13/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thank You soo much Kim
Date: 4/10/2015 3:04:00 PM
Sasha, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thank You so much BW
Date: 3/30/2015 7:23:00 PM
A great poem. I see that this poem won in a contest--congrats.. A7 and truly enjoyed reading this poem..
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thank You so much RObert :)
Date: 3/29/2015 12:04:00 PM
Sasha, thank you for the nice reply...PD
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Date: 3/28/2015 7:10:00 AM
beautiful - so glad to see it was a winner
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 4/13/2015 4:12:00 AM
Thank you so much JAck :)
Date: 3/24/2015 4:16:00 PM
Hi Sasha, congratulations on your nice win! I enjoyed reading your poem very much and thought your interpretation of that visual was wonderful. Sandra
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Date: 3/25/2015 3:53:00 AM
Thank You So much Sandra :)
Date: 3/21/2015 7:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sasha. Enjoyed reading your poem.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 3/23/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thank you Afroze :)
Date: 3/20/2015 6:10:00 PM
Sasha, a seven on your poem and congratulations on your win blessings Eve
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Date: 3/21/2015 1:33:00 AM
Aah Many thanks Eve :)
Date: 3/20/2015 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Sasha! Hugs, Kimberly
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 3/20/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim :)
Date: 3/20/2015 2:13:00 PM
HI SASHA, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 3/20/2015 2:14:00 PM
Aah thank you Skat :)
Date: 3/20/2015 2:03:00 PM
Sasha, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 3/25/2015 11:19:00 AM
Linz wats the deal with this monica chick.. she seems like a spammer
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 3/20/2015 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda.. :)
Date: 3/20/2015 1:03:00 PM
Such delightful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan :)

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