An Angel In Disguise

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Beside the linen hanging out to dry,
a young girl trudges with a basket full
of sheets that she has cleaned. Her head is bent
to hide a tear she does not want to cry.
Although in summer’s heat, she’s feeling spent,
it’s not her work now troubling her soul.

Her mother’s had to work hard every day
and leave the children by themselves till night.
There is no outside help; the mother tries
to raise a brood whose father passed away.
Her sweetest child, red-haired and oh so wise,
does much to make her mother’s burden light.

She knows her mother needs to get some sleep.
An old soul, she sees all and rarely cries,
but while her brothers run free in the sun,
she drops her load and simply starts to weep.
Grief flows till she resumes her role - the one
that is the family’s angel in disguise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/27/2015 12:56:00 PM
Nice one Andrea. Some have to be angels at an early age. love phyl
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Date: 3/22/2015 4:47:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/21/2015 8:17:00 AM
This is moving and makes me think of my wife, she took on a parenting role from age nine. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 3/21/2015 6:54:00 AM
Wow Andie this girl is really an angel...God bless...Congrats on win...Love--Rajat
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Date: 3/20/2015 5:59:00 PM
Andrea, back to congratulate you on your fantastic win. Blessings Eve
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Date: 3/20/2015 3:38:00 PM
Andrea, stopping back to congratulate you on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:52:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:18:00 PM
Congrats Andrea :)
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:12:00 PM
ANDREA, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:02:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2015 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on this most inspiring and delightfully sweet poem, Andrea! Many warm congrats on your top win in this contest! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/20/2015 12:59:00 PM
DROPPING BACK TO CONGRATULATE YOU ON YOUR TOP SPOT:-) hUGS jAN XX
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Date: 3/1/2015 4:33:00 AM
Just back to say it is well deserved. It is a beautiful work that touches the heart. Love Shane
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:21:00 PM
very cool! and touching,
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Date: 2/27/2015 2:20:00 AM
Double whammy POTD and POTW - at the top where you belong! hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2015 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations.... It has been an extremely cold and snowy February.... We just had another 6 inches this morning with temps dropping to about 0....
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Date: 2/26/2015 1:54:00 PM
Oh Andrea....You are just amazing. I'm always in awe after I've read one of your pieces. :) This is no exception. Beautiful....in every way. Congrats on being POTD and POTW. You rock, woman! Hugs
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Date: 2/25/2015 8:18:00 PM
Nicely done, and grats on poem of the week :) :)
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Date: 2/25/2015 2:35:00 PM
A pretty poem, Andrea Dietrich :)
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Date: 2/25/2015 2:27:00 PM
ok glad I didn't get involved in this contest ,lol.Real tear jerker well written Andrea ,good luck in the contest as always. Oh and congrats for poem of the week your poem wiped my mind clean,forgot why I originally stopped by, :o)
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Date: 2/25/2015 4:00:00 AM
Wow Andrea, your poem has a touching story...all the best in the contest!
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Date: 2/24/2015 10:09:00 PM
Andrea this write shows your heart and your soul, and what ever daughter should do to help her mom! Great inspiration, congrats!
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Date: 2/24/2015 3:19:00 PM
Andrea this write is a terrific and touching, she is a beautiful and sweet angel indeed! Big congrats! Hugs
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Date: 2/24/2015 3:12:00 PM
Lovely, so full of emotion and spirit!
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Date: 2/23/2015 8:11:00 PM
Hi! Andrea, Inspiring write it is and congratulations on POTW honor. :) Rajkumar
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