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An Angel In Disguise

Beside the linen hanging out to dry,
a young girl trudges with a basket full
of sheets that she has cleaned. Her head is bent
to hide a tear she does not want to cry.
Although in summer’s heat, she’s feeling spent,
it’s not her work now troubling her soul.

Her mother’s had to work hard every day
and leave the children by themselves till night.
There is no outside help; the mother tries
to raise a brood whose father passed away.
Her sweetest child, red-haired and oh so wise,
does much to make her mother’s burden light.

She knows her mother needs to get some sleep.
An old soul, she sees all and rarely cries,
but while her brothers run free in the sun,
she drops her load and simply starts to weep.
Grief flows till she resumes her role - the one
that is the family’s angel in disguise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Babcock Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Nice one Andrea. Some have to be angels at an early age. love phyl
La France Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:17 AM
This is moving and makes me think of my wife, she took on a parenting role from age nine. Congratulations Andrea.
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 6:54 AM
Wow Andie this girl is really an angel...God bless...Congrats on win...Love--Rajat
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Andrea, back to congratulate you on your fantastic win. Blessings Eve
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Andrea, stopping back to congratulate you on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Maharaj Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Congrats Andrea :)
A  Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:12 PM
ANDREA, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
A   Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Andrea, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
Shaw Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on this most inspiring and delightfully sweet poem, Andrea! Many warm congrats on your top win in this contest! Hugs, Kimberly
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 12:59 PM
DROPPING BACK TO CONGRATULATE YOU ON YOUR TOP SPOT:-) hUGS jAN XX
Cooper Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 4:33 AM
Just back to say it is well deserved. It is a beautiful work that touches the heart. Love Shane
Michael Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 8:21 PM
very cool! and touching,
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Double whammy POTD and POTW - at the top where you belong! hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Congratulations.... It has been an extremely cold and snowy February.... We just had another 6 inches this morning with temps dropping to about 0....
Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Oh Andrea....You are just amazing. I'm always in awe after I've read one of your pieces. :) This is no exception. Beautiful....in every way. Congrats on being POTD and POTW. You rock, woman! Hugs
Nance Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 8:18 PM
Nicely done, and grats on poem of the week :) :)
Marsden Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 2:35 PM
A pretty poem, Andrea Dietrich :)
Stoner Jr Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 2:27 PM
ok glad I didn't get involved in this contest ,lol.Real tear jerker well written Andrea ,good luck in the contest as always. Oh and congrats for poem of the week your poem wiped my mind clean,forgot why I originally stopped by, :o)
Mutindi Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 4:00 AM
Wow Andrea, your poem has a touching story...all the best in the contest!
Adams Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Andrea this write shows your heart and your soul, and what ever daughter should do to help her mom! Great inspiration, congrats!
Macfarlane Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Andrea this write is a terrific and touching, she is a beautiful and sweet angel indeed! Big congrats! Hugs
Gray Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Lovely, so full of emotion and spirit!
Thoungamba Meitei Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Hi! Andrea, Inspiring write it is and congratulations on POTW honor. :) Rajkumar
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