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An Alien In Autumn

Autumn brought its early cold nip in the sitting room,
Father’s spirit was down, a shot of whisky helped.
Mother thought it was time to set up the fireplace.
In came the alien with pointed ears, strange dress and all.
An ugly gun was in his hand, as the clock struck nine.
“All submit to my powers,” the mighty alien cried.
Mother smiled and elevated him to bed.
“Time to sleep, Mr. Spock. Your Enterprise will come tomorrow!”
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Milgate Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Really cute, and fearless.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 3:44 AM
Adorable. Love it. God bless you always with love and prayers for you
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 4:02 PM
Very cute
Crabtree Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 8:31 AM
This was great, Victor. He looks like a little Mr. Spock :)
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Ha! Clever and so well-expressed Victor. I smiled at the little guy :) Linda
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 10:50 PM
What a charming family scene you've described, Victor. Children find such joy in their imaginations. :=)
Downing  Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 1:33 PM
Good one Vic, made me smile :)
Roper Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 9:57 AM
This is so cute and pretty close to what children pajamas look like. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 9:07 AM
This is so cute, Victor. What prompted THIS in you?
Y. Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Hi Victor, What an adorable write. The imagination of a child is priceless. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
Ball Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Lovely. A child can make the most mundane evening seem brighter. Good Stuff and love the pic. God Bless, JB PS Mr. Spock was my favorite too.
Daniel Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 6:29 AM
A child can try to live his dream, well written, Victor:)
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 6:19 AM
oh such a sweet poem and lovely pic, this is charming Victor:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Much humor in the scene you set up, Victor. Entertaining story.
Cunningham Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 5:00 AM
The world of make believe through a child's eyes. Live long and prosper Victor. Tom
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 2:34 AM
Superb ending. Little kids are all same.
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 2:26 AM
- A sweet ending, Victor ... lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 2:00 AM
oh, how delightful a story, and just what a little one would do. Love it, Victor.
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