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An Alien In Autumn

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Autumn brought its early cold nip in the sitting room, Father’s spirit was down, a shot of whisky helped. Mother thought it was time to set up the fireplace. In came the alien with pointed ears, strange dress and all. An ugly gun was in his hand, as the clock struck nine. “All submit to my powers,” the mighty alien cried. Mother smiled and elevated him to bed. “Time to sleep, Mr. Spock. Your Enterprise will come tomorrow!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/3/2021 9:43:00 AM
Really cute, and fearless.
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Date: 1/31/2021 3:44:00 AM
Adorable. Love it. God bless you always with love and prayers for you
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Date: 1/30/2021 4:02:00 PM
Very cute
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Date: 1/30/2021 8:31:00 AM
This was great, Victor. He looks like a little Mr. Spock :)
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Date: 1/30/2021 7:24:00 AM
Ha! Clever and so well-expressed Victor. I smiled at the little guy :) Linda
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Date: 1/29/2021 10:50:00 PM
What a charming family scene you've described, Victor. Children find such joy in their imaginations. :=)
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Date: 1/29/2021 1:33:00 PM
Good one Vic, made me smile :)
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Date: 1/29/2021 9:57:00 AM
This is so cute and pretty close to what children pajamas look like. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/29/2021 9:07:00 AM
This is so cute, Victor. What prompted THIS in you?
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Date: 1/29/2021 8:51:00 AM
Hi Victor, What an adorable write. The imagination of a child is priceless. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/29/2021 8:43:00 AM
Lovely. A child can make the most mundane evening seem brighter. Good Stuff and love the pic. God Bless, JB PS Mr. Spock was my favorite too.
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Date: 1/29/2021 6:29:00 AM
A child can try to live his dream, well written, Victor:)
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Date: 1/29/2021 6:19:00 AM
oh such a sweet poem and lovely pic, this is charming Victor:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:30:00 AM
Much humor in the scene you set up, Victor. Entertaining story.
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:00:00 AM
The world of make believe through a child's eyes. Live long and prosper Victor. Tom
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Date: 1/29/2021 2:34:00 AM
Superb ending. Little kids are all same.
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Date: 1/29/2021 2:26:00 AM
- A sweet ending, Victor ... lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2021 2:00:00 AM
oh, how delightful a story, and just what a little one would do. Love it, Victor.
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