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An Agitated Fly

An agitated fly is buzzing my window it can’t comprehend the impossible. But it’s a fly, and can’t lose hope. It knows not the futility of its efforts as it doggedly pursues its freedom. For reality lies beyond its reach, comprehension’s an invisible barrier. Stubbornness or perseverance which motivator fuels it? It sees no glass, and yet, it’s there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/12/2020 5:10:00 AM
Ideal subject matter for form! Plenty of analogies to draw.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/12/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Sigrid, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.

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