An Agendaless Age

Often I drift back to my days of youth
to where life did begin; a rural treat,
those sharp brisk mornings a moorland uncouth
a naïve nakedness a one-way street,
simple things like the sun rise snow and sleet.
No timetables no worries to go wrong
tuneful mum dusting the blues in a song,
where fences were constructed to lean on
over which chat neighbours when ties were strong,
A relief thinking of those days long gone.

 2021

Entered Mark Toney's
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile contest 15
30/9/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 11:40 AM
more congrats to you on this well deserved Marathon win
Ashley Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Dear Harry, it is such a pleasure to return to this exquisite gem to enjoy it once again. Every evocative line brims with the bittersweet beauty of nostalgia. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Harry, thank you for sharing this "rural treat" with us! You accomplished this wonderfully nostalgic dizain in just two sentences, making it flow in our minds as the memory that it is. Brilliant! A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 15 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. Also, check out my blog post to view your current standing in the Marathon.
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January 8, 2022 at 9:37 AM
A very belated Congratulations my dear friend on a stupendous write with such graphic, nostalgic descriptions, when neighbors were still neighbors, when simple things we used to do meant so much more, - stupendous poetry and no surprise that it got POTD. My very best to you and your lovely family, always be blessed, and may 2022 be a year of peace and health. Hubby and I went away for a few weeks to the beautiful scenic Midlands in Kwazulu, Natal - a much needed break. Hugs, Jennifer
Roper Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Wonderful write, Harry, your words for the past and the outlook of nature are meaningful in your poem.
Ashley Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 5:06 PM
Dear Harry, I adore the nostalgic beauty spilled from your sentimental pen. A sweet gem of rustic reminiscences. Your warm rich textured imagery brings me to the center of your moorland youth “where fences were constructed to lean on”. Exquisite, dear poet. Warmest wishes to you and yours for a merry Christmas, my friend.. ~Susan
Romios Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 3:31 PM
Fantastic, Harry Congratulations... Panagiota Happy Holifays
John Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 2:18 AM
I do remember a tuneful mum! She was tuneful indeed. Thanks, Harry.
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December 14, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Sorry, I am late. How did I miss this wonderful write??? Congratulations on POTD win. I hope you are doing OK. Have a great/blessed day......................
DiMino Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 1:48 PM
You know, sometimes this, so called, modern connected age, seems to me, not connected at all...at least, not to Spirit and one another, where it counts most. Blessings my friend! A great read. Thank you.
Horne Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 7:14 AM
a beautiful nostalgic write, my friend
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Much deserved!
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 3:55 PM
Harry, you've written a wonderful poem. You remember good times from a long time ago when life was considerably more laid-back. Congratulations on your POTD.
Tor Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Wow Harry so true and touching my friend. Memories will fill your heart my friend...
Awtry Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 12:27 AM
“fences were constructed to lean on”—love that picture! This is a time travel on a page! Enjoyed:)
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December 5, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Wow I can read your heart is in this one mate' I often think the last of anything resembling A good age was in the 70's and then it Was getting thin' the world has run for millenia with its ups and Downs, also if sustainability is required why not Repair the transport we have & put a heavier price On new cars and get fuel from grain or food waste I know lots of unsold bread is going straight to landfill in the UK today and pits are Dug using fuel 4 machines.' Good to read this Harry.'
Kannan Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 12:12 AM
What a beautiful poetry that brings back the old memories... A pleasure to read...
Peranteau Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 1:02 PM
If we had not the digits, our engrams would be sequestered...thank Jehovah God Almighty for ourn dukes digits! Have a grand day sir...much love, james
Rose  Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Happy go lucky Friday dear friend :)
Gregory Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 12:56 AM
as laid back as can be, fence design to lean on. a crisis strewn world ask a lot. nicely done Harry
Watt Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 11:43 PM
Harry, I love this... so teeming with nostalgia for the bucolic countryside and simplicity of youth. Wonderful dizain format, too. Congratulations for your POTD acknowledgement ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 4:41 PM
love this one and I'm also seeing it's a POTD . WELL DESERVED. Congrats.
Deo Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 4:54 AM
To address the topic, Harry H. is a product of that ge if we see the common characteristics of NOT having an agenda in relationships (On PS as in life). shalom, shalom
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 3:58 AM
Your description of youth is spot on, Harry. Wonderful write...enjoyed!
Deo Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:44 AM
You are an artwork of God, a masterpiece of listening and Poetic Gifts. Thx shalom shalOm ?? Sir Harry
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