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~Another Magical Fairyland Story - An Unexpected Visitor- Part 1 (Short Story or Narrative poem) It was very early in the morning when I was just having What I thought was a very good time relaxing all by myself And remembering all the wonderful times that now have gone by Since another year had come and left again here in Fairyland. It has been all to tell the truth not all that great all the time Since there has been quite some days that I wish rather not Remember now especially today when all seem to be so sad. I was about to embark in another one of my exciting journey When all of sudden I heard what sounded like my front door Opening and right there behold came bouncing in with a big grin My very good friend and roommate the Mouse, who just been Himself as usual said his usual greeting with a very warm hello And a happy wave of his hand in my direction as he spotted me Sitting at the table and having my usual hot and nice cup of tea. This afternoon I was having a very delicious blend of mint tea With other few spices thrown in the mix to accentuate its favor. I wavered my hand at him and smiling I said hello to him too and Asked him to stepped in the dining room and invite him to have A nice cup too and he told me grinning that he would be more Than content and very happy to do it since he was in need of Having my very good company and having a good conversation With me and update me in some recent happenings in Fairyland. So he came around and just sat in his usual chair, then served Himself a very nice warm cup of mint tea too. Then he turned To face me and started to share with me many things that have Been Happening in Fairyland for the last 24 hours or so and I was More than happy to hear what he was sharing with me when all Of Suddenly I heard what sounded like a very tiny fainting little Childs voice coming somewhere from where he sat and asked Him if he's heard it too and then just smiling at me he dipped in Deep into one of his shirt pockets and gently brought out ... Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2016 February.15.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~ Authors Notes: To be continued in the second part by the title...An Unexpected Visitor Part 2. :))

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