A'Musing

At 6 a.m. this morning’s sun Was huge and orange-red, Without a hint of what the day Would be like hours ahead. For now the sky is full of clouds With not a speck of blue. That orange orb is hidden And they say a storm's a’brew. At least there is a little breeze So I can sit until The raindrops head my way; by then I will have had my fill.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2021 5:36:00 PM

Funny how 'Cecilia Vallejo' (the scammer) below seems to have popped up on so many sites today with the exact same message. Get out your bug spray. :) gw

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/8/2021 1:14:00 PM

A lovely piece ilene, so well penned indeed as there's nothing more unpredictable than the weather no matter where we are in the world. take care, Gordon

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/8/2021 12:10:00 PM

Weather forecasters continue looking at their computer rather than out the window, but there is nothing quite like enjoying the moment - and your poems! Aloha! Rico

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/8/2021 11:40:00 AM

Yep. I awakened to cloudy skies. It rained until about noon and then cleared up. The skies are blue now. I love the freshness after the rain. Good writing, Ilene.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2021 11:30:00 AM

we can never predict exactly what the weather will be like as we can get differences between the north and south of the island, no matter what weather you had today I hope you enjoy it... and knowing you there is always wimbledon to keep you busy if its raining lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/8/2021 11:29:00 AM

Lovely. You never know when weather will change.