Phyllis Babcock Poet Rhyme

Among the Stars

Up near Jupiter and Mars,

Far among the cluster of stars.

We take a ride on Saturn's rings,.

And around the moon we swing

On Haley's comets trail,.

Thru the Milky way we sail.

Galaxy after galaxy we pass by,
,
Up here beyond the sky.

Pluto, Neptune and Venus too,

And some planets all to new.

Come take a wonderous ride with me,

And see how wonderful astronomy can be.

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Emm 'N Ashe Lemons January 22, 2011 at 10:36 AM Wow, this reminds me of Aladdin and Jasmine's ride on the magic carpet but a million times cooler (Y) I never thought someone could make astronomy sound fun :) Congrats on being featured.

Constance La France January 21, 2011 at 3:52 PM Congratulations on your "featured" poem this week~~

John Freeman January 19, 2011 at 4:22 PM Congratulations Phyllis, on your worthy poem being featured this week. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2011 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week on PoetrySoup Phyllis. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick January 16, 2011 at 8:42 PM Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured on Soup, Phyl..I'm sure you've since heard that som Astronomer has discovered that astrological signs have now shifted? I don't pay much attention to astronomy but it sounds interesting. Hope you had a good Sunday. Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 16, 2011 at 6:16 PM Congrats Phyllis on your featured poem this week on the Soup... great one to share with us all with luv my friend...

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2010 at 9:44 PM Phyllis, I could see this one as a prelude to an astronomy class. And having the kids recite it with you! REally nice.