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Among the Stars

Up near Jupiter and Mars, Far among the cluster of stars. We take a ride on Saturn's rings,. And around the moon we swing On Haley's comets trail,. Thru the Milky way we sail. Galaxy after galaxy we pass by, , Up here beyond the sky. Pluto, Neptune and Venus too, And some planets all to new. Come take a wonderous ride with me, And see how wonderful astronomy can be.

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Date: 1/22/2011 10:36:00 AM
Wow, this reminds me of Aladdin and Jasmine's ride on the magic carpet but a million times cooler (Y) I never thought someone could make astronomy sound fun :) Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your "featured" poem this week~~
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Date: 1/19/2011 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations Phyllis, on your worthy poem being featured this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week on PoetrySoup Phyllis. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured on Soup, Phyl..I'm sure you've since heard that som Astronomer has discovered that astrological signs have now shifted? I don't pay much attention to astronomy but it sounds interesting. Hope you had a good Sunday. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congrats Phyllis on your featured poem this week on the Soup... great one to share with us all with luv my friend...
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:44:00 PM
Phyllis, I could see this one as a prelude to an astronomy class. And having the kids recite it with you! REally nice.
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