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Among the Stars

There was a small creature from Mars Who was fascinated with all of our cars He took one for a spin And got bopped on the chin Now he just flies among the stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/22/2010 11:18:00 PM
Only an HM? HEck this was really good!
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Date: 3/25/2010 6:48:00 PM
good one,thanx+peace!
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Date: 3/23/2010 5:00:00 AM
Cute one...and a great way to avoid road rage. LOL Congratulations Steven, on your honorable mention in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:14:00 PM
Steven Congratulation on your success in this competition, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:54:00 PM
Congrats Steven on your HM in the Limerick contest.. a wonderful honor for u to so enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 3/19/2010 3:15:00 PM
good one! Steven! congrats! jimbo
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations Steven on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest, Steven. There were many great limericks and judging was difficult! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2010 5:04:00 PM
cute and funny--I like it
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:15:00 AM
NICE ONE VERY FUNNY HOPE IT'S FOR CONTEST IF SO GOOD LUCK LOVED IT FALESHIA
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Date: 3/12/2010 4:54:00 AM
Great Limerick that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/12/2010 2:57:00 AM
Made me laugh, enjoyed the limerick.
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