Among the Stars

There was a small creature from Mars
Who was fascinated with all of our cars
He took one for a spin
And got bopped on the chin
Now he just flies among the stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 11:18 PM
Only an HM? HEck this was really good!
Frew Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 6:48 PM
good one,thanx+peace!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 5:00 AM
Cute one...and a great way to avoid road rage. LOL Congratulations Steven, on your honorable mention in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann
Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Steven Congratulation on your success in this competition, Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Congrats Steven on your HM in the Limerick contest.. a wonderful honor for u to so enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Goff Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 3:15 PM
good one! Steven! congrats! jimbo
Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations Steven on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest, Steven. There were many great limericks and judging was difficult! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 5:04 PM
cute and funny--I like it
Murphy Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 8:15 AM
NICE ONE VERY FUNNY HOPE IT'S FOR CONTEST IF SO GOOD LUCK LOVED IT FALESHIA
Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 4:54 AM
Great Limerick that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Nutter Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 2:57 AM
Made me laugh, enjoyed the limerick.
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