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Among the Souls of Empty Hearts

Among the souls of empty hearts O distant bells of steeples chime in echoed hymns of saddened weep Comes again the midnight hour, down dampened cobblestone to creep Along the darkened streets they roam of alleyways and torches fed. To reap the fortunes of desire, black shadows, piercing eyes of red With fingers crawling guttered dreams, slicing realms through endless mist Empty hearts which now they seek with blade of sharpened steel now kissed To carve the tears, come wailing fall, neath worried frowns on window sill Collecting that which no one knows, until such bellies have their fill With carpet bags and tethered rope, a list on which your name is scrolled When heard the knocking on your door, just close your eyes of nightmares told Soon you’ll wake to find your place among the souls of empty hearts Where clouded paths shall be your guide, this valley as your soul departs

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Date: 1/31/2017 4:21:00 AM
You always make me smile by stating how you want to add some counter balance to the beautiful love poetry you write. Whatever you write, it's excellent. Some poems appeal more to me than others, but they all are very special.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 8:22:00 AM
Well, I've been told that people get sick of love poetry after a while so I try to change it up a bit from time to time. Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 1/30/2017 4:15:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Chris. Edgar Allen Poe woulda been proud to have penned this poem. Excellent gothic feel, a true gem of imagination, plus a cool title to boot. A 7 and a fave. Cool double dip for you w/this morbid masterpiece. L & P ~ always.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 5:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie, it seems dark days have found us. :) I am glad you enjoyed this eerie poetic realm I have penned today. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/30/2017 3:17:00 PM
Wonderful flow as usual, Chris. A little darker than you normally write. I love dark:) That's probably where you will find me, among the "souls with empty hearts"
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel, sometimes it gets a little dark for everyone. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 1/30/2017 2:42:00 PM
I'm not answering until Cupid comes calling...excellent Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 3:00:00 PM
Good idea Tim. :) Thanks so much my friend.

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