Amid the Jagged Shadows

" Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs"
  - Samuel Taylor Coleridge

Gold tinged paints dripped from the air,
under the clear opalescent autumn sky,
jade foliage turned to full-bloom flower,
I flew my heart like a bird over the canopy.

The canopy of your allure so beguiling
took me to the enticing heights of ecstasy.
The nest we built in the cleft of boughs
glistened in love-laced moonshine night.

Night of strife surged a wrecking storm,
the nest crumbled to debris of despair.
You flew away to the sunny sky obscure,
left me to suffer in the spasm of winter.

Winter frost slithered with the north wind
to desolateness of the defoliated boughs.
I felt my love freeze in the congealed heart
amid the jagged shadow of broken wings.

" Without love, we are birds with broken wings"
 - Mitch Albom


November 28, 2019
For Brian Strand's Contest A Brian Strand July 12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/5/2019 6:21:00 PM
Subimal congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this lovely poem!
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Date: 12/5/2019 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations! You deserved a win!
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Date: 12/4/2019 12:45:00 PM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2019 3:52:00 AM
Wow Subimal, this stunning poem is a Fave for me! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:38:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Subimah
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Date: 12/3/2019 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 11/30/2019 11:21:00 AM
Subimal, Eve & Andrea are both right. Your poem has wings and heart enough to fly high in the bloom. Good luck Dear Heart's contest. -Richard
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Date: 11/29/2019 3:30:00 PM
Andrea is right this is very good, Subimal. I love that you use the artist point of view in your poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/29/2019 1:34:00 PM
wow, that is so good, Subimal. this is sure to touch the heart of Constance.
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Date: 11/29/2019 1:34:00 PM
look at that. My captcha was AWE
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