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Amid the Jagged Shadows

"Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs;" I sit alone in the Winter of my life To ponder, the length of years by my own design Here in this dim-lit realm of shades I need to leave love's tribulations on the barren floor of my mind and free my soul from love's grief that flows fluid upon the invisible silence of wished filled yesterdays that have gone with my lost horizons painted in fool's gold reliance Perhaps, I will remember a happier time when the light of life filled my desires in rendered emotions of inlaid passions and dreams of wondrous wonder Where footprints had yet left imprints upon the virgin landscape of my soul I once cast asunder Beneath these leafless boughs, my amber thoughts lay scattered across my memory as I wrestle reality away from the illusion and once again fill my empty eyes with tomorrow Before my life's Winter comes with its dark cold and buries me beneath these leafless boughs next to the grave of the love I sold 11/22/19 contest writing Challenge-3-November Any Form Poetry Contest sponsor...Dear Heart-Wisshkobi Ode

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Date: 2/15/2022 8:45:00 PM
Musically, romantically, be a couple's dance for all time! Great Frederic, Aloha~William!
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 12/17/2019 6:35:00 AM
nice, very nice
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Date: 12/13/2019 3:26:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Frederic: So many phrases that resonated with me. The video with it is so beautiful. Best, SuZ
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Date: 12/8/2019 1:37:00 PM
Great write Frederic, I think all of us as we get older do an introspection just as you so ably describe in your write. Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:07:00 PM
Dear Frederic, I have long been a fan of your talent for writing sonnets, but this free verse post is just as impressive as your rhyming lines. "...virgin landscape of my soul." Wonderful phrase!
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Date: 12/5/2019 6:12:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem and I love the music!
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Date: 12/4/2019 12:51:00 PM
- Congratulations so much Frederic, on your top winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2019 3:19:00 AM
I'm so happy to see this favorite poem of mine in first place Frederic. Truly deserving. Congratulations my friend! xxoo
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Frederic
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Date: 12/3/2019 6:44:00 PM
back to say congratulations ... hugs
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Date: 12/3/2019 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 11/28/2019 8:24:00 PM
so beautifully sad. You took the quote and came up with sterling silver!
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Date: 11/25/2019 12:00:00 PM
Frederic, your words spoke to me as coming from someone whose life experience has left you with the kind of knowledge that comes from the duality of heartbreak versus happiness. Yet still your romantic heart seeks the healing balm of love. I love this beautiful poem that so many of us can identify with. I am putting it into my Faves! Have a beautiful holiday! xxoo : )
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Date: 11/23/2019 7:52:00 AM
I think we all sit and ponder and i find it sad you see it as the winter of your life.... our life should be like summer... i always love your deep thoughtful poems...
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:57:00 PM
beautiful but poignant write, the sadness pokes through.... nicely penned, best wishes in the contest....
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