Amid the Jagged Shadows

"Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs;"

I sit alone in the Winter of my life
To ponder, the length of years by my own design

Here in this dim-lit realm of shades
I need to leave love's tribulations
on the barren floor of my mind
and free my soul from love's grief
that flows fluid upon the invisible silence
of wished filled yesterdays that have gone
with my lost horizons painted in fool's gold reliance

Perhaps, I will remember a happier time
when the light of life filled my desires
in rendered emotions of inlaid passions
and dreams of wondrous wonder
Where footprints had yet left imprints
upon the virgin landscape of my soul I once cast asunder

Beneath these leafless boughs,
my amber thoughts lay scattered across my memory
as I wrestle reality away from the illusion
and once again fill my empty eyes with tomorrow
Before my life's Winter comes with its dark cold
and buries me beneath these leafless boughs
next to the grave of the love I sold



11/22/19 
contest writing Challenge-3-November
Any Form Poetry Contest
sponsor...Dear Heart-Wisshkobi Ode

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Date: 2/15/2022 8:45:00 PM
Musically, romantically, be a couple's dance for all time! Great Frederic, Aloha~William!
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 12/17/2019 6:35:00 AM
nice, very nice
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Date: 12/13/2019 3:26:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Frederic: So many phrases that resonated with me. The video with it is so beautiful. Best, SuZ
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Date: 12/8/2019 1:37:00 PM
Great write Frederic, I think all of us as we get older do an introspection just as you so ably describe in your write. Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:07:00 PM
Dear Frederic, I have long been a fan of your talent for writing sonnets, but this free verse post is just as impressive as your rhyming lines. "...virgin landscape of my soul." Wonderful phrase!
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Date: 12/5/2019 6:12:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem and I love the music!
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Date: 12/4/2019 12:51:00 PM
- Congratulations so much Frederic, on your top winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2019 3:19:00 AM
I'm so happy to see this favorite poem of mine in first place Frederic. Truly deserving. Congratulations my friend! xxoo
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Frederic
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Date: 12/3/2019 6:44:00 PM
back to say congratulations ... hugs
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Date: 12/3/2019 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 11/28/2019 8:24:00 PM
so beautifully sad. You took the quote and came up with sterling silver!
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Date: 11/25/2019 12:00:00 PM
Frederic, your words spoke to me as coming from someone whose life experience has left you with the kind of knowledge that comes from the duality of heartbreak versus happiness. Yet still your romantic heart seeks the healing balm of love. I love this beautiful poem that so many of us can identify with. I am putting it into my Faves! Have a beautiful holiday! xxoo : )
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Date: 11/23/2019 7:52:00 AM
I think we all sit and ponder and i find it sad you see it as the winter of your life.... our life should be like summer... i always love your deep thoughtful poems...
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:57:00 PM
beautiful but poignant write, the sadness pokes through.... nicely penned, best wishes in the contest....
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