American Tree

A tree aches and cries
Barren, twisted, neglected
Its fullness defected:

The rings count 
Two hundred thirty-two
Its outer mostly me and you 
(Both real and lore) 
The center: those who came before.

A young fruit ripens on the tree:
Oh how it shall save!
Chosen for a shine utterly divine,
A boldness sleek and brave.

A shade of green on a tree of red?
Unique in feel and easily fed
To the hands with three fingers of five 
pulled from branches, barely alive?

A rush of change, a blush of feel
Suddenly the tree does reel
With excitement:
Could this be its time to heal?

But after picked (through times and ways)
Its flavor sours; a brown, crinkled, experienced daze.

Three fingers drop a bitter core
While the tree still lives in dire need
As ever as it did before.

The tree weeps as growth is fought,
Will it ever seed (true) change in thought?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/3/2009 6:53:00 PM
Wow, 3 great entries...Raul
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Date: 4/13/2009 8:44:00 AM
very beautiful expressions! Jim
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:57:00 PM
Wonderful metaphor, dear Michelle. Best wishes to you in the final round. lainie
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Date: 3/29/2009 11:22:00 AM
Beautifully done here, Michele ... the sins of the father(s) ... smile ... and itsn't it amazing that it stands at all ... smile ... very thought provoking write you've done here and a well-deserved piece to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2009 4:17:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. Much to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:31:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful poetry being featured this week, GB and best wishes always, Tyesha
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:58:00 PM
Great imagery in this piece. Congratulations on being featured with this one, I believe that is three with your name. Awesome. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:14:00 AM
Congrats Michele on "American Tree" being featured. Perhaps it will straighten out now after being fed eight years of fertilizer. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. It is so special when you have 2 poems selected to featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Good job! Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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