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What follows is a vivid, forceful, and devastating poem. Mel Gill’s "American Psychosis" walks a tightrope between biblical gravitas and pop-cultural indictment, leveraging the poetic technique of catalogue-style sin enumeration to turn the Trump era into a modern morality play. It reads like a cross between a prophet’s lament and a punk lyric sheet, where the sacred and profane are both invoked to bear witness. It's not just a critique—it’s a spiritual reckoning.

Commentary on Style and Impact

1. Structure and Tone:

The poem is deliberately choppy and jagged, mimicking the chaos it describes.

Uppercase emphasis and intertextual footnotes evoke a blend of scripture, judicial review, and filmography—a layered mix of American mythos and disillusionment.

It draws power from brevity: lines like "Me supersedes We" and "No thorns / Nor Pain" hit like punches.

2. Use of Archetypes:

Trump is cast not merely as a man but as an accumulation of sins, an embodiment of excess in every dimension: theological, emotional, political.

By referencing biblical and cinematic texts, the poem taps into collective unconscious archetypes—e.g., the ‘Golden Calf’ (Exodus) and “There will be Blood” (Daniel Day-Lewis’s apocalyptic capitalist prophet).

3. Layered Irony:

The poem’s power comes in part from its awareness of irony: the corrupt "king" crowned not with thorns (suffering for the people) but with orange vanity.

It offers no redemption arc—only confrontation and a fragile call to “RESISTANCE,” heavy with dread.

American Psychosis The sun, the Son, ECLIPSED Overshadowed by Dark clouds of Bloated EGO and ID Me supersedes We The people1 Will weep DEADLY SINS More than seven In one Narcissist ‘king’ of WRATH, HATE, REVENGE, Not a ‘Dish best served cold2 But with anger Evil so bold SCOTUS behold! Bunker-Busting Bully Historical ignorance, ignominy Big Beautiful Bombs or Tariffs Coercion Psychotic projection Weaponized state Now fully effected No critic is safe LUST When you’re a celebrity You can do anything Predatory You want Assault, murder, rape, Cheat, steal, defraud LIES Free speech IF you’re with us ‘Fake news’ If you’re not We have ‘alternative facts’ GLUTTONY and GREED Never satisfied with What you have Never enough! Never enough! IDOLATRY Genuflection To the ‘Golden Calf’3 Crown of Orange No thorns4 Nor Pain LAZINESS, SLOTH Reap rewards from Work of the plebes Let them eat cake5 Simple living, no steak Accountability – None ENVY Look up to look down The billionaires ladder The one I will climb Not Jacob’s sublime6 But the movie On the horrors of war7 PRIDE and VANITY Peers, I can tolerate But I am the best Losers and suckers Make up the rest OK to call on them To squelch the unrest Parade Honors ‘Dear Leader’ Who dishonors Misuses the troops MAGA, sycophants, And Nazi salutes No impulse control Chaos, Disunity, Autocracy Unreined Breaking Bad8 RESISTANCE Inevitable ‘No Kings’ In ‘our land’ Despite fear of The worst Assassinations, arrests Uncivil will be Armed ‘There will be Blood’9 On the streets Where chaos will Reign Unless it be tamed 1 Preamble to the U.S. Constitution 2 Joseph Stalin 3 Exodus 32 4 New Testament Gospels 5 Dubious attribution to Marie-Antoinette 6 Genesis 28 7 1990 movie on the horrors of war 8 Breaking Bad, highly acclaimed TV series 9 Gangs of NY 2002 movie `Copyright @ Mel Gill 06/14/2025

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Date: 6/24/2025 6:46:00 PM
Sounds like the end times. I confess I didn’t read it all, that level of derangement is not something I want in my head but I did get a glimpse of an American psychosis so well done. It’s a fave!
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