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You crown all roses in the garden of Eden that which grows Such was Your Love nourished words would do no justice to charity Bread of existence feeds us daily hope to rise above our human weaknesses Divine Mercy written within the heart of a sinner weeps thorns of Your suffering injustice commands the Spirit Truly Immaculate inside out believes in You defending what is right and lawful Lord light of my life You shine a beacon straight though me

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/31/2018 5:07:00 PM

Full of faith and divinity..your words are far reaching Liam.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/31/2018 4:02:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' outstanding spiritual poem filled of faith n' light, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.Amen!Enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav !You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) I truly wish you n' your very dear family a very Happy New Year, filled with lots of love, joy, hope,happiness, health and peace!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^