Ambivalent Autumn

Audacious Autumn rushes in,
Making her way on Summer's heels.
Bringing along big pots of paints,
Instantly Summer's thunder steals.
Vivid hues and ripening fruits,
Are some of the gifts she brings to all.
Lavishly bestowing them on
Each of us as we worship Fall.
Nodding with glee, she mixes  blends,
Turning the greens to shades of brown.

As summer fades we wave goodbye
Utterly charmed by Autumn the clown.
Tenth month October takes his turn,
Unlike ninth month, aloof and cool.
Mist, rain and wind are her late gifts,
Naughty Autumn plays game of fool 

Written August 27, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Autumn Acrostic" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 2:35 PM
I really like how you personified Autumn. A lovely write, Joyce Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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September 16, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Fantastic and awesome,Joyce..I love this..Great work,nice images..Congratulations on your well deserved win...
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 11:27 AM
downright endearing, joyce... my best congrats on your win!..:) huggs!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 9:48 AM
Your unique talent really shines in this winning poem Joyce. CONGRATS!
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 9:23 AM
GREAT idea using the alternate rhyme of lines and the personification of autumn, Joyce. Clever and cute!! Congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 12:53 AM
CONGRATS JOYCE ON A REMARKABLE WRITE AND WONDERFUL WIN FOR AN AUTUMN ACROSTIC LUV ..
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September 15, 2012 at 11:30 PM
Joyce, , a wonderful congratulations with your wonderful win in Francine Roberts " Autumn Acrostic " love the breeze and image ~ always* PD
Roberts Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 10:58 PM
many congrats Joyce on your 9th place win in the contest
Pettit Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 11:18 PM
All the pieces of the puzzle fit together nicely in this acrostic poem about autumn. Nicely done.
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August 28, 2012 at 6:53 PM
Another lovely autumn poem from you, Joyce! Although I don't get to experience it in the south, autumn is still my favorite month. Hugs, Rhonda
Bauer Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 2:22 PM
i like this, joyce! beautiful imagery and great use of rhyme (as usual!).
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