Ambivalent Autumn

Audacious Autumn rushes in,
Making her way on Summer's heels.
Bringing along big pots of paints,
Instantly Summer's thunder steals.
Vivid hues and ripening fruits,
Are some of the gifts she brings to all.
Lavishly bestowing them on
Each of us as we worship Fall.
Nodding with glee, she mixes  blends,
Turning the greens to shades of brown.

As summer fades we wave goodbye
Utterly charmed by Autumn the clown.
Tenth month October takes his turn,
Unlike ninth month, aloof and cool.
Mist, rain and wind are her late gifts,
Naughty Autumn plays game of fool 

Written August 27, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/20/2012 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Autumn Acrostic" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2012 2:35:00 PM
I really like how you personified Autumn. A lovely write, Joyce Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/16/2012 1:09:00 PM
Fantastic and awesome,Joyce..I love this..Great work,nice images..Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Date: 9/16/2012 11:27:00 AM
downright endearing, joyce... my best congrats on your win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:48:00 AM
Your unique talent really shines in this winning poem Joyce. CONGRATS!
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:23:00 AM
GREAT idea using the alternate rhyme of lines and the personification of autumn, Joyce. Clever and cute!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/16/2012 12:53:00 AM
CONGRATS JOYCE ON A REMARKABLE WRITE AND WONDERFUL WIN FOR AN AUTUMN ACROSTIC LUV ..
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:30:00 PM
Joyce, , a wonderful congratulations with your wonderful win in Francine Roberts " Autumn Acrostic " love the breeze and image ~ always* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 10:58:00 PM
many congrats Joyce on your 9th place win in the contest
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Date: 8/30/2012 11:18:00 PM
All the pieces of the puzzle fit together nicely in this acrostic poem about autumn. Nicely done.
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Date: 8/28/2012 6:53:00 PM
Another lovely autumn poem from you, Joyce! Although I don't get to experience it in the south, autumn is still my favorite month. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 8/28/2012 2:22:00 PM
i like this, joyce! beautiful imagery and great use of rhyme (as usual!).
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