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I was determined to catch your insight. I never let you trip over a braking mistake. My affection for you resembles candlelight. However, it's too noisy to hear a voice sake. I never let you trip over a braking mistake. When held, it must look like a pinless bomb. However, it's too noisy to hear a voice sake. Spread arms as searing wildly with aplomb. When held, it must look like a pinless bomb. Who wouldn't be scared around it anyway? Spread arms as searing wildly with aplomb. To apply my inner voice sparingly and sway. Who wouldn't be scared around it anyway? I don't punctuate my emotions like poets. To apply my inner voice sparingly and sway. Which love stories conclude in snow huts? I don't punctuate my emotions like poets. Show me your worst side and scary past. Which love stories conclude in snow huts? I can cure your buried pain; it will heal fast. Show me your worst side and scary past. Don't chafe at it—love will lead you free. I can cure your buried pain; it will heal fast. I'll bear the choices your heart dictates to me. Don't chafe at it—love will lead you free. My affection for you resembles candlelight. I'll bear the choices your heart dictates to me. I was determined to catch your insight.
Written: February 07, 2023

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Date: 2/12/2023 2:44:00 PM
Intimate lights, like fireflies of insight... breathless rays, promises of grace. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/9/2023 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful Pantoum of deep love and surrender. Love can heal all. Hide not your insecurities for my love is unconditional. Excellent poetry my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Have a blessed week! Bill
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Date: 2/8/2023 1:02:00 PM
WOW!! What a Pantoum write and lovely picture. Your pen was writing overtime. Have a great day.....................
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Date: 2/7/2023 11:33:00 PM
This is a wonderful pantoum, not easy to write considering its length. Very well composed.
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Date: 2/7/2023 8:42:00 PM
Beautiful Pantoum, Very well crafted
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Date: 2/7/2023 8:12:00 PM
"Show me your worst side and scary past. Don't chafe at it—love will lead you free. I can cure your buried pain; it will heal fast. I'll bear the choices your heart dictates to me."... What more is required to heal and ease a burning heart, if such an assurance is got ! Your ability to reach out to people in pain is so evident from this poem. Beautifully composed, dear Lasaad.
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Date: 2/7/2023 2:15:00 PM
Lasaad, this poem truly is written from your compassionate heart. "Show me your worst side and scary past...I can cure your buried pain." Your heart does indeed reach out with healing hands asking only the opportunity to wrap another heart in balm. Thank you for sharing this caring poem. Blessings!
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