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Am I Not Life?

Even if my bright heartbeat is riddled in darkness, am I not life?

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/13/2023 1:38:00 PM

Its life..Yet not as it can be.' A flicker we Are aware of Hi'ya, the journey part of the Reward to recieve.'

Karen Croft

Date: 10/15/2023 9:57:00 PM

A very good question. Yes it is life. Thank you very much for kind comments on my poem.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/11/2023 10:12:00 PM

Of course, a beautiful and precious life <3

Karen Jones

Date: 10/5/2023 3:18:00 AM

Yes! To answer the question. I like the contrasting light and dark. Did u win a contest with this one?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 9:03:00 PM

Back with my congrats, Hiya

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2023 10:37:00 AM

Yes, you are life even co-existing with the darkness. One little candle lighted is better than no light at all. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for visiting my page. Sara

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/30/2023 2:33:00 PM

that's quite astute. Ms. Hiya. enjoyed.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/30/2023 9:15:00 AM

Excellent. !! Perfect :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/30/2023 6:29:00 AM

A great one liner dear Hiya... Our life...our soul is so powerful... than we could ever imagine sweet inspiring poetess. Whenever am on here at Soup, so glad to read so many wonderful poems... Hugs... ~ Ani

Sam Scott

Date: 9/29/2023 10:56:00 PM

This is one of the best! A fave. :))

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/29/2023 10:18:00 AM

Wherever there is light and, or darkness, there is living and living dead. Well penned!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/29/2023 7:18:00 AM

BRIGHT heartbeat……..DARKNESS. Nicely composed. Blessings. I think, you are an Indian. Are you Bengali ? Where do you stay ? If you wish, you can soup mail me. Where D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2023 2:53:00 PM

Wonderfully profound, Hiya

Silent One

Date: 9/27/2023 12:25:00 PM

Great one liner, quite profound.. we are all life.. although some can feel quite dead sometimes..

Bill Baker

Date: 9/27/2023 8:35:00 AM

A powerful question you present us with in this fine Monoku, Hiya. If there is a heart beat, there is life, and a light within. So many metaphor possibilities in your poem, my friend. The reader has the choice. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/26/2023 3:15:00 PM

You've evoked a keen sense of sadness, questioning the universe if you are life, but uplifting as well, because you're also proclaiming a statement, that you are life itself. Compelling. makes for a great quote as well, Hiya. I can't keep up! Great poetry xoxo

Tom Woody

Date: 9/26/2023 8:50:00 AM

Life indeed. But life without light is a sad one indeed. Let's hope her bright heart gets the love and light she deserves.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/26/2023 6:15:00 AM

Precious thought, Hiya--Endearing flame of hope and light burns in every heart.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/14/2023 8:36:00 PM

So true, thank you so much for your beautiful and honouring words, I'm very grateful for your evergreen support and for the kind comments on my poems, always :) - Regards!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/26/2023 5:58:00 AM

Hiya, The wondrous gem concealed within you possesses the power to be unveiled, its brilliance radiating forth into the world whenever you choose. What a great and deep one-liner Monoku.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/14/2023 8:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Sotto, for your beautiful words of encouragement and kindness.. I'm deeply grateful for your wonderful support always and for such beautiful feedbacks :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2023 5:53:00 AM

- The jewel inside you can be brought out into the light at any time ... - A deep line, Hiya - hugs

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/14/2023 8:34:00 PM

Very true, we are all life and it's just a matter of time and desire, when the flame of resilience flickers once again within us.. Thank you so much for your beautiful support dear Anne-Lise :)

Karen Jones

Date: 9/26/2023 3:54:00 AM

Aaaah this is deep. I love the contrast and the penetrating thoughts behind your word choice Hiya! Good one!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/14/2023 8:33:00 PM

Awh, thank you so much dear Karen, I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this and felt the emotions within.. Really grateful for your wonderful support :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/26/2023 2:31:00 AM

Wonderfully intriguing. Forcing me to think... it's early morning, but your poetry glimpses light, yes, life. Exciting the waters, delighting the seas, embracing the moments with a delicious delicacy. God bless you and much love, Gina

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/14/2023 8:32:00 PM

Awwn, dear Gina, you're a beautiful and empathetic soul.. I'm so glad that you felt the depth of this monoku and grateful for your gorgeous words, that reflect 'life'.. Indeed! Sending love :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/26/2023 2:09:00 AM

Dear beautiful angelic star, you are so young but you have seen so much of the world, and you are wise beyond your years! And i must remind you, you are life, you are alive, you mean so much more than any darkness around you, riddled in darkness your heartbeat may be, but you are more than all that which may be challenging! You are stronger than you know! Keep shining always! Love this powerful monoku! Well delivered! Goodluck for the contest

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/14/2023 8:30:00 PM

Dear gorgeous Ink, you're my real Fairy Goddess and I'm forever grateful for your unmatched kindness, precious love and support! You've been a ray of warm sunshine in my life.. Thank you you so much for everything, I treasure your beautiful heart, always :) sending you tons of love!! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this..

Sam Scott
Date: 9/29/2023 10:55:00 PM

Lovely true words :)