Am I Not Life?

Its life..Yet not as it can be.' A flicker we Are aware of Hi'ya, the journey part of the Reward to recieve.'

A very good question. Yes it is life. Thank you very much for kind comments on my poem.

Of course, a beautiful and precious life <3

Yes! To answer the question. I like the contrasting light and dark. Did u win a contest with this one?

Back with my congrats, Hiya

Yes, you are life even co-existing with the darkness. One little candle lighted is better than no light at all. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for visiting my page. Sara

that's quite astute. Ms. Hiya. enjoyed.

Excellent. !! Perfect :)

A great one liner dear Hiya... Our life...our soul is so powerful... than we could ever imagine sweet inspiring poetess. Whenever am on here at Soup, so glad to read so many wonderful poems... Hugs... ~ Ani

This is one of the best! A fave. :))

Wherever there is light and, or darkness, there is living and living dead. Well penned!

BRIGHT heartbeat……..DARKNESS. Nicely composed. Blessings. I think, you are an Indian. Are you Bengali ? Where do you stay ? If you wish, you can soup mail me. Where D

Wonderfully profound, Hiya

Great one liner, quite profound.. we are all life.. although some can feel quite dead sometimes..

A powerful question you present us with in this fine Monoku, Hiya. If there is a heart beat, there is life, and a light within. So many metaphor possibilities in your poem, my friend. The reader has the choice. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

You've evoked a keen sense of sadness, questioning the universe if you are life, but uplifting as well, because you're also proclaiming a statement, that you are life itself. Compelling. makes for a great quote as well, Hiya. I can't keep up! Great poetry xoxo

Precious thought, Hiya--Endearing flame of hope and light burns in every heart.

Hiya, The wondrous gem concealed within you possesses the power to be unveiled, its brilliance radiating forth into the world whenever you choose. What a great and deep one-liner Monoku.

- The jewel inside you can be brought out into the light at any time ... - A deep line, Hiya - hugs

Aaaah this is deep. I love the contrast and the penetrating thoughts behind your word choice Hiya! Good one!

Wonderfully intriguing. Forcing me to think... it's early morning, but your poetry glimpses light, yes, life. Exciting the waters, delighting the seas, embracing the moments with a delicious delicacy. God bless you and much love, Gina

Dear beautiful angelic star, you are so young but you have seen so much of the world, and you are wise beyond your years! And i must remind you, you are life, you are alive, you mean so much more than any darkness around you, riddled in darkness your heartbeat may be, but you are more than all that which may be challenging! You are stronger than you know! Keep shining always! Love this powerful monoku! Well delivered! Goodluck for the contest

A deep thought. Wish you luck.