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Always For Grandma

 
Original poem - For Grandma You died grandma and my heart was broken, At your funeral I stood there trembling; And in the name of love words were spoken, I needed to speak words without weeping. Me, standing up front holding my papers, There was a soft breeze caressing my hair; I looked at your coffin and the flowers, Oh, how I wished this was just a nightmare. I started to speak in such a sad voice, And then, I felt your great strength within me; I spoke of your life so all could rejoice, So filled with your love that I spoke so free. Then, I felt the papers go fluttering, And in the name of love, I was speaking. ___________________________ New poem - Always For Grandma And in the name of love, I was speaking, As they put your coffin into the ground; I looked calm but inside I was screaming, Staying, until birds were the only sound. Then, I went to the quiet of your home, Wandering, I touched all your precious things; And even to the attic, I went to roam, Oh, grandma, your strength gave my poems wings. It was you who gave me my first journal, And you said, write it, write down all the pain; My love for you grandma, is eternal, And at last I wept, and outside was rain. I lingered there for hours with memories, Within me grandma, safe are your stories. ______________________ February 28, 2016 Poetry/Sonnet/Always For Grandma Copyright Protected, ID 16-765-513-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Famous Last Line sponsor, Laura Loo First Place
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Bankson Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Your Grandmother sounds amazing and I'm truly sorry for that loss,but you now she's having a good ole time watching you write and win..Wish I couldn't relate but that was great and ''effortless'' writing.
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Jai, thank you for visiting and for that nice comment, yes grandma was amazing for sure !
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:48 PM
Hi Broken, I meant LINDA, not Lina. LOL... PD
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:27 PM
lol, I knew it was you !
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Hello Broken, Congratulations on your awesome "Famous last line win." ~LINA~
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the awesome ~
Warrior Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Is there a contest you don't win? lol...I'm running out of congrats lol...congrats...A7...hugs ()()()()()()...^WW^
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Winged, lol, yes there are some I do not place in, lots in fact ! Thanks for the congrats and the 7 and the huuuuugs !
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations on your win !!!! Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and the hugs !
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:57 AM
Glad to be back and see that these special poems took top honors. Very deserving Contance. Big Congratulations! #7
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Connie, thanks for the lovely comment, the compliment, the congrats and the 7 !
Daniel Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:06 PM
A 7 for this. I can't express how much I love the line "I looked calm but inside I was screaming"
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Jo, thanks for the 7, appreciate and screaming inside is something I do often !
Daniel Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:04 PM
This moves me to tears. I remembered my grandma after reading this beautiful write. Excellent and a well deserved win. Congratulations:)
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Jo, thanks for the beautiful and the excellent and congratulations, my grandma was such an important part of my life that her death shattered me, I know people do not live forever, she was 94, yet I wanted her too ~
Johnson Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:00 PM
well done Constance and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Joyce, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the love !
Mcclain Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Hi Broken Wings, An epic tribute, imbued with profound respect for your subject magnified by your enormous sensitivity and poetic skill. Congrats on yet another well-earned win. Cheers, Brian
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Brian, thanks for the lovely comment, compliments and congrats, so appreciated !
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:33 PM
What a beautifully written, poignant poem, Broken Wings! Congrats on your win!
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Laura, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats !
Smith Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Beautiful win BW. Very touching...
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Charlie, thanks for the beautiful and the compassion ~
Raven Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Hi Constance, both poems are absolutely beautiful. Your words did bring forth tears from this heart. So gently they did caress my Soul. My journey through your poetry is a walk through Heaven's wonders. The gift is truly yours. Your Love and deep emotions did come out in these writes. There is always sadness in our lives Constance. We always have memories, but being human, we would rather have the person with us. A seven and a fave for a most beautiful Soul....Vlad.
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Mike, thanks for the lovely comment, the 7 and the fav, so appreciated, dear friend ~
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings :-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the congrats, hugs back !
Scars Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:36 AM
WOW! did this pull at my heart strings BW! You always touch my heart with your words. Epecially after just losing my grandpa..congrats on your top placement in my contest..:)-luloo *Smiles*
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Laura, thanks for a great contest theme and for my awesome win, so sorry for the loss of your grandpa, I understand the pain ~
Eastman Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Touching... Every year I put flowers on the family graves. It makes them real to me once more as I spend the time to remember them... There are sooo few family members to remember them now a days... Time has taken them away....
La France Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Carol, thanks for visiting my poem, yes, too many graves, I have lost almost everyone I love, lots of graves to visit, time has taken them away... sometimes too soon ~
Inman Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Exceptional BW, a beautiful sharing of your emotions.
La France Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 12:46 PM
James, thanks for visiting with the exceptional !
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Beautiful , Broken Wing, a7 and awinner:-)
La France Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the 7 and the encouragement !
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Reads like a winner..What a great tribute to your grandmother..I know that she knew how you loved her and she loved you even more..Thanks for the visit to my blog..Sara
La France Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting my poem and the nice comment, appreciate so much !!
Onclaud Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 1:33 PM
my grandma was a teacher like me and she taught me how to appreciate poetry... so lovely, constance; you took after her!.. huggs
La France Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Nette, thanks for visiting my poem, and for the nice comment and the lovely and hugs. ..
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:01 PM
I know what a massive influence your grandma had on you - encouraging you to the amazing poet your now are - a beautiful touching story:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
La France Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting, yes grandma was my reason for being a poet, she encouraged me to write, I wrote her Eulogy, and when I was holding my papers, a wind took them, and I had to just speak, and I spoke so loud and so clear, I felt grandmas strength within me... oh thanks for the beautiful and the hugs too....
Davey Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Very touching story as you can make us as the readers feel your sorrow and pain with you, well done
La France Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting with that nice comment and the compliment !
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 3:42 PM
I will be back to see the finished poem. ;)
La France Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Connie, thanks for visiting, all done now ~
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