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dread vibrates echoes howl left right left right walk into the gloom tunnel vision sky obscured candle (no more) light (sight)

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Date: 11/9/2023 8:30:00 PM
an aesthetic treat when said aloud -
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Date: 11/9/2023 10:55:00 PM
Thank you very much for saying so, much appreciated :)
Date: 11/9/2023 7:06:00 PM
Pithy and strong write Dilly!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/9/2023 10:55:00 PM
Thank you Eric, I'm honoured by your visit :)
Date: 11/9/2023 2:37:00 PM
a rhythmic Ninette, Di11y. I felt a tiny sense of dread as I 'marched' along with you. Nicely done. Have a splendid day, Sara
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Date: 11/9/2023 10:55:00 PM
Thank you Sara - I appreciate your comment x

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