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already fallen

my winded kiss— there snowstorm glistens, its holiness on blue lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/9/2023 2:28:00 AM
Moving monoku
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Date: 12/4/2023 7:46:00 AM
deeply conveyed -
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Date: 12/4/2023 4:27:00 AM
woah... this is brilliant... so much to think about in only one line..
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Date: 12/3/2023 7:46:00 PM
I love your title the most, ah how evocative and soulful is that. And i love how you’ve written in such a descriptive manner. You are just w natural
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Date: 12/3/2023 7:40:00 PM
Very unique and very original, Paige. Vibrant imagery in seventeen syllables! Blessings to you!
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