Home » Poems » Mick Talbot » Alphabet Haiku - Tough Trees Tremble

Alphabet Haiku - Tough Trees Tremble

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ true terror... trashing... tortured... tricked... teased... terrorised tough trees tremble too ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Modern haiku form created by Beatrice Evans, aka Ronnica at Allpoetry It requires only strict 5 7 5 syllable construction with all words beginning with the same letter

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/1/2018 7:05:00 PM

alliteration at its best in brevity. The repetition here did not sound monotonous as some does. Not familiar with this kind of haiku; but I really like the piece and the point you make. I'm connecting this with the peer pressure that teenagers put other teenagers through.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/3/2018 3:41:00 AM

Reason, It all adds up, peer pressure, all sorts, just believe in yourself and do it... Regards Mick