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Along the Sea Shore

They walked barefoot on the wet sand.
The hot sun had dipped beyond the horizon.
The brine and fresh air intertwined,
How pleasant to walk hand in hand!

Occasionally she would stoop, 
Her wedding ring glinting in the dying sun.
She would search for lovely decorated shells,
Whilst he tried throwing flat stones
Across the calm stretch of the waveless sea.

Finally, they had to turn back to their inn.
The access to the beach stopped their tracks.
Large rocks hindered further progress.
They did not mind really.  It was dark now.

Their previous footprints were almost obliterated.
Above the dark sky like sequins glittered stars.
They arrived at the inn, finely prepared.
They found champagne and sipping all 
Until they fell into a deep restful sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/7/2025 10:43:00 AM
A very romantic poem Victor, a walk on the beach and champagne before sleep, wonderful… Beryl
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Date: 8/30/2025 7:49:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts and images - sounds like one romantic stay/walk
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Date: 8/28/2025 7:55:00 AM
Dearest Victor, such a lovely scene — from sandy toes and shell collecting to stars and champagne at the inn. It reads like the perfect recipe for romance, where even getting stopped by rocks feels like part of the adventure. Poetic storytelling at its finest...Hugs
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Date: 8/27/2025 11:49:00 PM
What a beautiful and unexpected evening they had. A wonderful write, dear Victor, the imagery was perfect. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/26/2025 9:38:00 PM
What a beautiful time for a couple to spend together. Wonderfully depicted
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Date: 8/26/2025 8:53:00 PM
Your descriptions clearly expose a heavenly ambiance. How beautiful it is to stroll hand in hand along the beach for two lovers. Finally after an evening's enjoyment, to retire to a solitary place for rest and sleep. Beautiful, dear friend.
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Date: 8/26/2025 2:08:00 PM
This is a beautiful story. It makes me wish it had happened to me. I'd have enjoyed the beach with champagne dinner to follow.
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Date: 8/26/2025 6:19:00 AM
A lovely day and night, outside in beauty, inside with champagne. xx
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Date: 8/26/2025 5:07:00 AM
- Victor, you are the perfect romantic I think you have genes from Cupid ... beautiful poem, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 8/26/2025 4:57:00 AM
Ahhh!! A romantic one that excels. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. I enjoyed reading it because it brought back memories. Sara K
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Date: 8/26/2025 3:56:00 AM
now that is what I call a lovely romantic tete a tete, well done Victor :)
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Date: 8/26/2025 3:52:00 AM
A lovely retreat emerges within the lines of this fine verse. In quiet moments, a gentle calm embraces the heart, and love blooms softly like the first light of dawn. Well done, Victor.
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Date: 8/26/2025 3:09:00 AM
Lovely vacation or retreat. Great sense of calm and loving. Well done, Victor. A fine read to say the least. You are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing.
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