Along the Road of Life I Carry With Me Memories

ALONG THE ROAD OF LIFE  I  CARRY WITH ME  MEMORIES


Recollected childhood trips seem an intensely hot affair.
We took a bus, tight-filled with sweaty people’s feet
For hours;  but then at the end,  there was  air.	
And gone were the constriction and glaring heat  - 

In the tranquil cool shade of the springtime wood.
There were spreading red campions and more -
In places where a little sun shimmered and could
Make yellow pools  on the woodland floor.

And everywhere  the fairy  bluebells  all
Nodding in crowds blue and thronging.
In life I carry with me and oft recall 
That day, the happiness, the feeling of belonging.

I picked armfuls hoping to preserve their beauty till later,
Wrapping them in wet cloth in a water-pail
To survive the torrid heat of the bus-incinerator,
Unaware that their happy lives I would  thus  curtail.

An intensely-lived child-experience does not diminish,
But telescopes into a longer event, perhaps with fairies,
Sometimes without  any definite finish.
Tiny spaces can morph into prairies. 

Maybe  the bluebells  were just  there in some  garden to find ,
But I did see them  somewhere,  and I  really made the trip,
I really smelled them. They were not just a dream in my mind :
And for years after, I wanted to relive their friendship.

But   trying  to recapture childhood memory
Is like trying to preserve  beauty   a-flowering
By picking it for a collection in a repository.
Its beauty is gone with the garnering.

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Written for  Paula Swanson's Contest   "I Carry With Me"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/16/2011 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Syd. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:13:00 AM
Congrats Sydney on your fabulous win. I could clearly visualize the little girl who collected bluebells and wrapped them secure. Loved your memories..have a joyful day , gautami
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Date: 5/15/2011 10:18:00 AM
Virginian Blue Bells grew on the lot beside my childhood home and I carry warm memories of them too. You took such TLC with them and these vivid details made for an amazing write. I like the tiny spaces that can morph into prairies! Congrats 2 u , Syd. Another great one. Gwendolen
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/15/2011 10:38:00 AM
Thank you for your warm words..glad you too knew bluebells as a child...yeah they are special - I love 'em.....best wishes...Syd
Date: 5/15/2011 8:10:00 AM
What a wonderful poem, Syd.....a beauty this is, that takes more than one reading. I wish it to be placed higher ...where it belongs.
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/15/2011 10:42:00 AM
Thanks very much it's always a delight when a widely-admired writer such as you can see the delight I got from the writing....i dont always get enough time t o write t o you but be assured I admire your stuff greatly.....let's keep in contact....best wishes....Syd
Date: 5/15/2011 7:34:00 AM
Amazing poetry from you Sydney.Congrats on your win and thanks for your congratulatory message at my page.
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:08:00 AM
Congrats Syd on another magnificent win and write in Paula's contest... enjoy with luv..
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:37:00 AM
Great write and win my friend!!
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Date: 5/14/2011 11:30:00 PM
Lovely memories, a deserving win. Congratulations x
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:40:00 PM
another delight of a poem from you … super cheers for the fine win, syd :) huggs
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/15/2011 10:48:00 AM
Thanks Nette, but you know that secretly I wish I was as skilled as you....the power of your verse is way above mine....I know it and you know it......I always enjoy reading your stuff but I dont always get time to write.....ok ....ok.....bye for now.... ....keep on adoring me L O L
Date: 5/14/2011 9:26:00 PM
Nice concept. Very Good write. Congrats.
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:01:00 PM
Yes, I did!
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/15/2011 10:52:00 AM
It's very sweet of you to think highly of my doggerel.........I sincerely appreciate YOUR support particularly Andrea.....let's keep in touch more....best wishes...Syd
Date: 5/11/2011 8:00:00 PM
Sydney, what a wonderful thought, carrying memories.Wish I had thought of that one. I like how you focused on childhood and one memory in particular. This is so wonderful. Hmmm, do I have you in my poets list yet? I need to check that!!
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