Alone With My Friends

Alone with My Friends

Palpable loneliness propels me to recline upon the deck,
	Amid the trees.
The trees, my friends, who speak in “breeze” and 
	Keep me company.
Mr. Ash, you know is, too, alone and brittle of his kind;
He tells me “Thank you for caring when am slow in the spring.”
Mrs. Deep Green Elm frames my face and calls me by name;
She lost her companion to a violent wind and will never be the same.

Umbrellas of your leafing warmth are cuddling me, 
Though you daily must face the elements, you sing;
You always spread your protective branches around and over me,
Your own joy seeing sprigs looking down upon your saplings.

All the while you know you’ll be called to fall some coming day.
As will I.
But until that day comes ‘neath a new hot Texas sky,
You will take the place of those now gone to me
And shade me lovingly with your arms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/7/2018 11:17:00 AM
There's something about just watching trees, their colors, their movements & their smells. Lovely verse, Sunlite :) Charlie
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Date: 9/3/2018 10:37:00 AM
Trees are amazing creations...and so is your verse Sunlite...love & trees...^WW^
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/4/2018 10:09:00 AM
Love and joy to you, WW! Thank you.
Date: 9/2/2018 7:43:00 PM
I love this beautiful tribute to trees and their wonderful worth Sunlite! The connection is palpable! : ) xxoo
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/3/2018 9:19:00 AM
So glad you liked this, Connie. I'm glad you responded because I've been wondering about you and the volcanoes. I trust you are safe.
Date: 9/1/2018 9:56:00 PM
I remember the joy of finding a good shade tree on a long and hot afternoon walk from my friends house to my home. The cool coming as if a drink of water to a thirsty soul. Love your very inspiring poem my friend.. A fav..
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Date: 9/1/2018 7:09:00 PM
gratitude for the company of 'chums' engages me, sun... really a remarkable poem!...huggs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/2/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, Nette!
Date: 9/1/2018 6:22:00 PM
I absolutely enjoyed your free verse, Sunlite.. Amazingly penned!! Wonderful!! Blessings..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/2/2018 12:48:00 PM
You comments are so kind and appreciated.
Date: 9/1/2018 2:15:00 PM
Your friends are awesome and caring..i enjoyed this loving tribute you wrote, SW.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/2/2018 12:48:00 PM
You are so right, Vijay! And I care for them.
Date: 9/1/2018 1:54:00 PM
Beautifully written Sunlite. I enjoyed this today :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/2/2018 12:47:00 PM
Thank you so much!
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