Alone Together - Oxymorons

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Oxymorons used- stanzas 1, 2, 3, 4

1. alone together, act naturally, seriously funny, deafening silence
2. found missing, minor crisis, impossible solutions,  jumbo shrimp,  hot chili 
3. deceptively honest, good grief, terribly good, low-key, festive tranquility, clearly 
    misunderstood
4. larger half, sweet-tart, butt-head, tight slacks, light tanks, magic realism


 


Alone together, we enjoy our time
   and mostly we act naturally well.
We can be seriously funny too,
   but deafening silence is hard to quell.

Found missing sometimes, a minor crisis of
   impossible solutions that are made,
like eating tasty, tender jumbo shrimp
   along with hot chili and marmalade.

And quite deceptively honest are we...
   good grief, we are what's called terribly good.
Low-key, festive tranquility is ours;
   we never are clearly misunderstood.

So pleased to be each other's larger half...
   sweet-tart and butt-head, we are such a pair;
tight slacks, light tanks, and we are good to go.
   Life's magic realism we do share.

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Date: 7/11/2021 2:32:00 AM
Love all the oxymorons but "Jumbo shrimp" and "butt head" stand out for me :) Sometimes a poem can be just clever but this is clever and beautifully written. That takes great poetic skill. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 7/10/2021 2:51:00 AM
Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/3/2020 2:44:00 PM
"Sweet-Tart and Butt Head," what great lines fill this delightfully uplifting poem, Sandra. Congrats on your big win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2020 12:30:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2016 11:53:00 AM
This was great Sandra! Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:45:00 AM
great job, congrats on your win
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Date: 9/8/2016 1:48:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2016 8:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra...
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Date: 9/7/2016 1:17:00 PM
Sweet Sandra! this is my fave in the contest :) such a great variety, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/2/2016 3:50:00 PM
How subtle is your use of oxys, Sandra. I was too moronic for this contest. I couldn't think of a single sentence. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:45:00 AM
Very, very clever, Sandra. If this isn't in the top three then I'm a Can-can girl dancing on a drilling platform off the coast of Alaska. Viv x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/21/2016 6:56:00 PM
Wow, Viv, thank you so much for your vote of confidence in your uplifting comment! I really had fun putting this together. Sandra
Date: 8/20/2016 11:49:00 PM
I loved your choice of Oxymorons. Playful, humorous & brilliantly written.
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal. I really enjoyed working with the Oxymorons! I appreciate your visits and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 8/20/2016 5:14:00 PM
Very good composition. Best widhes for contest
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha. Something different to work with, and I enjoyed it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/20/2016 9:48:00 AM
Great humour here Sandra I had fun finding the word pairs:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Yes, I had a good time writing this! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/20/2016 9:19:00 AM
Really well done Sandra, only thing is you never left any more for us! Ha ha I'm sure I can dig up something. Very funny read, nice change of pace for you!
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Date: 8/21/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, John. I am pleased that you found it funny. I had fun writing it! Sandra
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