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Alone In the Garden, I Heard Voices

I hear a voice calling my name but I don't hear it; I see a vision I can obtain but I can't hold it; you can't see me; you can't hear me; but I am a sound I am a sound; you can't see me; you can't see me, but I see you; all around; on the ole tatter land; I was walking in the garden one day; in the mist and I heard someone say; Go on you shall live and not surely die; you may eat of this; and you shall be called blessed; what is death? what is death? for He's really just... jealous that you will be liken unto Him YOU WILL BE LIKE HIM I hear a voice calling my name but I don't hear it; This WO-Man you have given me; you see it's your fault, that I'd listened; See called out my name; said don't be afraid; we shall not surely die, What is death??? I heard a voice calling out my name; but I don't hear it; I see a vision (I dream, dreams) But I don't see them; what does this mean; I can't comprehend it; I can't hold it; I've already tasted it; I can't see it; but I've already felt it; I can't hear you calling out my name (our name) forever more was once Adam/Eve; Now our new name is Sinner; when you listen too the inner voice; make sure it's still, make sure your still; make sure you hear what you hear; hear the still small voice of the Lord; make the right choices in life; so that you won't surely die; when your alone in the garden of life; you too will hear voices; make the right choices in life; so that you won't surely die;

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Date: 7/5/2017 1:11:00 PM
James wow! Is all I can say.I always listen to my inner voice, I always have. Good advice.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 7/5/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thanks, for the read and encouragement. As I've told fellow Souper's or followers, I've been spontaineously taking two or more words out of their replies and making (trying to hopefully) a lyric or poem out of the responses. Guess what I got from U, "Got A Choice, Listen to My Inner voice" felt inspired by the words, thanks "there's praise in words and words in praise"---James E Lee Sr.

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