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Alone In Scary Silence

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The moon veiled in a web darkness; bejeweled in radiance starkness, to delve into the dark only the prince of darkness. I was alone in the silence weaves, while childish, I walk through dried leaves. With every breath my chest heaves. I tried to hurry though the abandon churchyard cemetery on my way home. It was so hard, it was a shortcut to get home, I uttered no word. Decaying stone steles overgrown with soft green moss, pushed up by tree roots, lean like shadow soldiers clawing their way to the surface unseen. Through the shadows, a gleaming old ivory, shaken, tinkling, but the notes were spidery strangled and eerie stripped of flesh and finery. Blue lights dance above each stele, while ghosts on the grounds in lavender reckon among their host. Now so lowly lie, as they do not weep, but boast. Through the open door and illuminated hall I run in; no sound upon the wooden floor as I spin. A grin from my mother; I am greeted by all the kin. 11/1/2021 ''S'' Contest, New Poems Poetry Contest 5. scary Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/7/2021 7:04:00 AM
Congrats on a win!
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Date: 11/6/2021 5:51:00 AM
Eve, awesome writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "S" Contest, I like your image too ~ love and serenity_ Constance
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Date: 11/6/2021 12:30:00 AM
"The moon veiled in a web darkness; bejeweled in radiance starkness" - Beautifully begun and the narration moves very fluently. Great work! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/2/2021 1:59:00 AM
I don't scar easily but your poem is great and dark. Best fro a win. Hugs.
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Date: 11/1/2021 10:03:00 PM
A scary walk indeed, Eve, well penned:)
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Date: 11/1/2021 6:06:00 PM
Wow, Eve. You scared the bejesus out of me! This is incredible! So well-composed and executed.
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Date: 11/1/2021 6:38:00 PM
thank you , Milt.. hugs eve

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