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Alone


    I am dead and lifeless,
    Cold and of the departed;
Two hundred years of wandering the world,
      Forlorn and forsaken.
I lay in a crypt waiting for awakening,
      And I feel her passing;
She walks close to my resting place this day,
And I feel my hands move and my heart beat.

    I must have her sweet blood,
    Oh, I can imagine it on my lips;
I stir within my coffin and open my eyes,
      I breathe her dulcet scent.
My endless pain, existence a nightmare,
      This eternal life lonely;
Full of agony, darkness and deep anguish,
Oh, I moan and push back the coffin lid.

    Could this girl be the one,
    My soul mate for eternity;
Standing there in the twilight I watch,
      She carries red roses.
Stopping at a grave of many names,
      And then I am there;
Startled she screams and turns to run,
But she is no match for a vampire man.

    Her beauty is surreal to me,
    I embrace her in my arms;
And as I pierce her neck I hear her sigh,
      Oh sweet, the sweetness.
Her blood is like the richest of wines,
      I carry her to my grave;
And place her gently in my own coffin,
This twisted nightmare I will not endure. . . 

                                           alone


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May 17, 2015


Poetry/Verse/Alone
Copyright Protected, ID 05-674-914-17
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest, 101 In A Row #2
sponsor, PD, Judged 2015

Sixth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Well done Constance, congrats on your win.
Arnone Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Amazing, B. W. Do more vampires -- you're good at it! Congrats! :-)
A   Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Tonight I will Write" and enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Arnone Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 11:46 AM
I keep hearing that same paragraph in my head. Perhaps, it is deja vu -- or, simply, a vampire's glamour....
Smith  Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 6:40 PM
Chilling read, very well crafted and written :) keep up the good work. Would be you be kind enough to take a look at my page that looks into the Gothic art form :) please feel free to like and share it as well! :) https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=hl Many thank!
Ebbs Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 9:25 PM
From the dark side indeed :) Congrats Broken!
A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 7:46 PM
this has epic imagery.... SKAT
Deschler Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 6:47 PM
A chilling and beautifully told tale from the dark side that I enjoyed very much!... Congrats on a great win!
Rios Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Better than Twilight movies lol , and your one of my favorite poets now your pieces are gold
Martin Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Finally! A really good vampire poem. of any other good ones except this one!!
Das Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 10:15 PM
A truly dark dark tale. Can't get darker than this. Sad and haunting. Excellent write. Looks like a sure winner in the contest. A #7
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