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Alone

December's harshness in the air can never quite compare to the ice inside your eyes-your stoic lack of apathy. So now your gone, and what have you left me? warm wine three quarters left untouched; a faded photo down the hall; drab dishes stacked in stained grey cabinets. The oaken table left unfinished beside a bare and sterile wall. Do not return again, my love; . To many chilly days have been absorbed into -to many frigid nights.

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Date: 5/23/2019 1:31:00 PM
An excellent piece reflecting the loneliness that hovers after love has gone - only memories and a cold house left behind! Just a wonderful write, Allen! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 5/19/2019 12:01:00 PM
Powerful, Allen. Loved it.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/19/2019 10:33:00 PM
Thank you Line
Date: 5/19/2019 3:29:00 AM
December's harsh cold combines well with the chill of frigid love, Allen. A lot of unfinished business, such as the untouched wine and oaken table add to the drab atmosphere. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/19/2019 2:24:00 AM
A clever write Allen, portrayed with vivid and imaginative poetic phrases - sometime alone for a while is better - it won't be forever! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/19/2019 1:26:00 AM
The echoes of being alone realized in words allen, Aloha wk
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Date: 5/18/2019 10:13:00 PM
Things as omens of loneliness. Brilliant and fav.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/19/2019 12:17:00 AM
Thank you Kurt
Date: 5/18/2019 7:59:00 PM
Your words describe your title well..A sad write...Well written...
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/18/2019 9:39:00 PM
thank you Joseph
Date: 5/18/2019 5:57:00 PM
I hope she doesn't try to come back to hurt you! There are worse things, I think, than being alone.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/18/2019 7:23:00 PM
I agree Sunlite

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