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Almost Midnight

1957 Oh, midnight's near, my dad made clear- our minutes left- just two! You know, my dear, we must adhere- though we're engaged- 'tis true. Please do not fear- that time is here, just hold me close to you. Can't interfere, must stay sincere- kiss me before adieu. My souvenir- words in my ear, will keep my love on fire; don't disappear, let's persevere- last minute will expire. Let's get in gear and spin our sphere- kiss me to heart's desire. Our love will steer our new frontier to levels even higher- when wed with cheer, this time, next year! But now, without sad eyes, without a tear, we'll still cohere- our hearts will win the prize! Time's done- though we're inclined to sneer, dad's rule we authorize. Love's our career, we'll pioneer- till church bells harmonize. 2020 Love's atmosphere, so far premier- full sixty-two years wed! Hearts did not veer, with much revere- love multiplied and spread. Gone yesteryear, life's cavalier- old curfew rules were shred; back then, so drear, yet helped to rear- forever love instead. November 7, 2020 Contest: In Rhymes Sublime Sponsor: Joseph May Iambic Heptameter 14 Syllables, 7 Feet Per Line

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Date: 11/22/2020 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and on your married years. Two great wins. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win..............
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Date: 11/20/2020 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on your great winner. Sara
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Date: 11/19/2020 11:50:00 AM
Well done and congrats, Sandra.
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:47:00 AM
A beautiful love story Sandra, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:02:00 AM
I love the way you structured this poem Sandra. It's lovely and clever! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/16/2020 9:44:00 AM
How very clever, I do like your poems, as they rhyme ! sorry but I'm very old fashioned and think it's important.
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