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Almost Home

The locks and the doors have been changed. And the furniture's been rearranged. The tone on the walls somewhat dimmer. But soothingly shine with a glimmer. Removing the dirt and the grime. That cant help but build up with time. It's so nice to refresh what's turned old. Before everything just turns to mold. A house is only a house. When it's walls are as quiet as a mouse. You can make it the theme of your poem. Clean and fresh, but never quite home. Why do some people live without love? Did they forget there's someone above? That is ready to fulfill their dreams. And make their home all that it seems.

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Date: 10/25/2014 8:14:00 AM
Love within self makes everyplace you live a home. To have been blessed to share it with someone likeminded and hearted... a gift to treasure. Love this pensive poem...
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:44:00 PM
I am thankful God gifted me with my sweetie. Life could not be better.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/23/2014 4:45:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem and message.
Date: 10/16/2014 10:17:00 PM
wow, this is one of your best I have seen in a while. I really like how you did this theme, Robert. A very fine poem.
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Date: 10/16/2014 11:47:00 AM
Homes are the nation.
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Date: 10/16/2014 11:37:00 AM
Having God in your life is like having a family member with you at all times to encourage and enlighten you. Awesome poem :) eve
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