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I suck on my lip after he leaves . . . and i can still taste his salt, and me i close my eyes and breath in deep . . . and i can still smell his skin, and mine i wipe my face with my hands . . . and i can still feel his fingers lingering, the way mine, lingered on him i go to spray purfume . . .but i'd much rather smell like sex i sigh, and wish he hadnt left five mintues ago . . . i already miss him im working on forgetting his enticeing eyes, . . . but i never want them to go away we were almost there . . . almost but she had to call sometime . . . they are almost done, almost but he doesnt want to leave her . . . and she doesnt want to leave him but he wants me . . . and i need him remember, because of this, they are almost done . . . but he and i we have just begun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/19/2009 11:08:00 AM
What a situation @.@ reminded me of a peculiar song, well, it isn't that peculiar but the situation is pretty much interesting too. Thanks a lot for sharing =D
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Date: 10/14/2009 9:00:00 AM
Funny you chose that word John, just another tourchering pleasure. 17 words in--his name
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Date: 10/14/2009 7:10:00 AM
rain great writting as always your work is powerful and no comments can do this work justice really exelent work . Great job great poem
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Date: 10/13/2009 9:46:00 AM
Very discriptive and sensual. Great write.
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