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Almost Christmas according to my calendar, the stores are decorated and in a clamor; snow falls in the frozen sky making days bleaker, a beggar holds out his hand as people walk by. In my church, red flowers and berries prettify, all alone and quiet, I hum a lullaby; pondering- the I want this and that till I cry, people seem to forget what Christmas is about. It is about a special baby, I want to shout, wonder if people recall that at the checkout; a baby born to die. Remember? I doubt- a homeless man lies dead and people keep walking. With shopping bags full they keep laughing and talking, for this poor lost soul will anyone be praying; yes, I will! And Jesus will take him up flying, that baby born, that man who died upon a cross. Remember him in all the Christmas wild chaos, oh, the Christmas story is not all floss and gloss; not about gifts, but about a son, a life lost, almost Christmas according to my calendar. _______________________ December 8, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/Almost, Christmas Story Copyright Protected, ID 17-9696-15-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Christmas Story, Theme 3 sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 12/27/2017 3:26:00 AM
The true meaning of Christmas we all need to remember. Very lovely Constance! Congratulations on your first placement! I hope you had a wonderful Christmas. : )
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Date: 12/22/2017 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings, so very sad that people are just thinking like little kids,in their minds its me, me, me, and move away your in my way it is a shame. Merry Christmas and Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/22/2017 9:04:00 AM
Very moving and reverent, Constance. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 12/22/2017 6:21:00 AM
Constance, how wonderfully well you put words into reality and intrigue those who read them. Congratulations on your win, and Merry Christmas to a great poet.
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Date: 12/21/2017 9:48:00 PM
Love this so much! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/9/2017 9:08:00 AM
Beautifully said my friend...we should all open our eyes and hearts to the true meaning of Christmas...well crafted Constance...god bless and happy holidays...Canadian style lol...^WW^
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Date: 12/9/2017 5:56:00 AM
Wonderful as usual,Friend...You rightly said,People hardly have time to ponder..Everyone's busy in celebration...
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:59:00 PM
So true...do they remember what Christmas is about. Most like to celebrate it in some fashion but cut out Jesus. So true we need to take the time to see our fellow man!
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:47:00 PM
2000 years ago a man walked the Earth, never traveled more than 200 miles from his place of birth, yet changed the world...thank you for reminding everyone
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:32:00 PM
A great reminder. Easy to get caught up in the commercialism.
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:00:00 PM
A shame so many need reminding, best wishes in the contest...
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