Alluring Title

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                                           Alluring title
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                                     Me, senior moment
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Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Congrads..
Fraser Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations Sara on your win in HG's fine contest with this little gem >> James :)
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 9:12 AM
lol, love it, congrats on your win in the contest
Gorelick Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Sara, to funny..its happened to me more than I want to admit. Congrats to you..BG
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's Contest Sara. Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Super congrats Sara on your wonderful win in HG's contest on comments and views... luv your message so much my friend.. hope all is well as u enjoy your sweet victory today with lots of luv...
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:25 AM
thank you sara enjoyed duncan
Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 2:58 PM
I'm laughing, Sara. This happens to me all the time! Cute poem. Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Hi Sara, enjoyed this Senryu this afternoon! And thank you so much for your ongoing kind comments! Have a nice week ahead!...Gert
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 2:54 PM
May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry this beautiful Sunday afternoon and thank you for sharing it Sara. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Hehe Sara, enjoyed this. Hope your weekend's been a great one ;)
Culverhouse Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Hey Mom, enjoyed your senior moment.
Loving Iii Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 6:53 AM
of course me. jhl
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Great ending line. I looked and saw Matt down here is same age as me!!
Anish Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Well, I am only 55 but have had a couple of moments myself. Well constructed senryu! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Sweetheart Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 5:48 AM
Very well written Sara and something unique today ..enjoyed my friend with luv.. luv that alluring title too...
Rhinem Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious & Priceless, Sara,' Amid The Joyful Autumns Colours of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Lovely Lady!":) ~
Brahma Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 5:35 AM
the truth being told in a humorous fashion enjoyed
Rhinem Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Smile ~ "Loved 'Your' Com, 'Precious & Beautiful, Sara Kendrick,'" for truly, one must confess their sins towards repentence &, "Know Ye Not, That Ye Are 'The Temple of The Living God!!!?'".... ~ Smile, I read & reread this cute little poe from "Your Beauty" yet, I must be tired for I cannot grasp it my dear although, I love the sweetness it seems to project ~ "Thank You" for stopping by dear; always a pleasure to behold "Your Brightness" ~ ....Cont:)
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October 23, 2010 at 5:15 AM
LOL.. thanks for the smile on this sunny Sat. morning....love Michael
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